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Books
· Perceptions

· ECHOSIS

· Prosetry at Work

· Said and Unsaid - Vol 1

· 3 WAY MIRROR


Short Stories
· Patience Waning

· Ladle Lines (A prosetry memory)

· A Gentle Man

· Pacing Love's Journey

· Gratitude

· A Sticky Conversation

· Blazing Now and Then

· Vulnerable Captivity

· The Kite That Would Not Bow

· Time


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· Desperation Breeds Desperation

· Preference Manifest

· Innocent Guilt

· Barbed Isolation

· A Place...

· Sanity's Loss

· Organs Anonymous

· Fatuous Beyond Absurdity

· Truth is One


Poetry
· The Life-long Pernicious Evil

· Cherishing Sounds of Silence

· Understanding the Unexplainable

· Reality of Another Kind

· Finding Trust Again

· Aromalicious Memories

· A Jungle-rain Pastorale

· Sediment Within the Soul

· Life's Enormous Green Chest

· Roadkill Memoriam

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A Road Becoming...

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

As the years mount up and I realize how naturally one can find one’s purpose as apposed to a journey of less purpose and more the satisfaction of others… well, to graduate from massive pages of text for the screen to minimal stanzas of poetry has indeed been a path, a trail, a road I didn’t expect. (Image by Odin AI)

Saturday, March 7, 2026


Poem Artwork

 A Road Becoming…


Poetry starts small,
a flicker the size of lint caught in sunlight,
the soft click of a lamp chain hesitating between off and on.
It arrives like a shy knock on the door
no louder than a moth’s wing,
yet somehow insisting you check who’s there.

A scent of rain on dust,
a half-remembered face behind glass,
a grocery list scribbled as if the pencil were dreaming of becoming a wand.
These faint sparks, these accidental nudges,
roll like pebbles waking a hillside that didn’t know it wished to move.


But soon the sparks bristle,
catching on the loose threads of thought
until the mind brightens,
a struck nerve glowing like copper wire,
a notion roaring up like a match that forgot it was small.
Ideas begin to leap fences, vaulting into the dark
where bolder fires wait to illuminate the unsaid.

Here…

 

The poem risks blistering its own hands,
shaping controversy the way ironworkers shape molten metal,
swinging purpose into form before it cools.
And somewhere between the flame of hope
and the shadow it throws,
a paradox stands grinning:
a poem that bruises and heals in the same breath.

Such poems,
the ones that matter,
walk willingly into unfamiliar woods,
leaving ash-soft footprints along a poet’s road less traveled.

 

 

 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 9, 2026
“You capture beautifully how a poem grows from the smallest tremor into something that reshapes the writer, something that I have "attempted" to write about. The imagery feels alive, and the closing sense of stepping into unfamiliar woods gives the piece its quiet conclusion.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 8, 2026
You indeed have taken a different road with the way you write your poetry. In many ways more creative and more in depth than most poets.

The one thing I missed about writing poetry was the ability to jot down a poem like a grocery list. When my hands quit handling pen and paper easily, I forgoed all that jotting down. And don't recall ever missing any items when buying groceries because I didn't have a list with me.

My less traveled road was always sitting down at a desk, a typewriter or computer, and not jotting down anything, even research notes. But getting to the business of writing from the memory of what I had gathered.

Much harder than notes, but the road that I traveled and still travel.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 8, 2026
A colorful collection of images shedding personal insight into how poems come into being. Indeed... Poets have to make something work in a small space. So to speak. A kind of skeleton architecture seeking to lighten, enlighten, piss off, or inform the reader. Alluding to Robert Frost's 'The Road Not Taken' in your title and the final lines I thought was effective.
"I shall be telling this with a sigh
Somewhere ages and ages hence:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I -
I took the one less traveled by,
And that has made all the difference."
Enjoyed your thoughts. Thanks. rlc


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