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Alive in Death

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Art of many forms has found its longevity in the digital world of Cloud preservation. For many of us, that preservation is what keeps up alive and creating. (Image by Odin AI)

Tuesday, March 17, 2026


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 Alive in Death

I.
We begin as silhouettes kneeling in the dark tide of the world,
our hands sifting through soil that remembers more than we do,
grit warm as breath, cold as truth, clinging to our fingers like the remnants of old vows.
Cultivating becomes a ritual of uncertainty,
a slow, stubborn coaxing of green possibility through the cracked mouth of winter.
Even nurturing is an act of surrender, leaning close enough to hear the tremor of a buried seed,
patient as someone listening for a voice returning from the edge of weather itself.

 

II.
And when gathering comes,
it does not bring gentle fruit, but artifacts of the heart’s interior storms:
a bundle of glass marbles fogged from years of held breath,
a cluster of tarnished brass keys o doors we once locked for our own survival,
a folded paper crane softened by the oils of too many second chances.
Experience bears these strange treasures the way an old pack animal carries
the final mile of a pilgrimage, solemn, necessary, wordless.


Wealth becomes the unbroken mind that reaches dusk without bitterness,
unburdened by what wasn’t meant to be kept.
And as the body loosens into the quiet beyond,
the heart continues, its pulse drifting like faint light through fog,
beating ethereally soft for those who wish to listen to art staying alive in death.

 

 

 

 





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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 22, 2026
Your poem carries a marked humility, a quiet acknowledgment of being shaped, sustained, and guided by something greater than ourselves. The imagery of breath, vessel, and likeness gives the piece a gentle spiritual aura, a whispered prayer of gratitude and surrender.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 18, 2026
A waterfall of images. Some odd, some exhilarating, some arresting, some surprising, some splashy, some stirring, etc. Cloud preservation makes all of us, who type their thoughts passionately on a computer keyboard, part of the global community. Digital Nomads (if you will) able to work anywhere our computers are, or where we can plug a USB drive into. I wish the writer well. Thank you for sharing. rlc

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 18, 2026
Your image certainly matches your prosetry.

After watching many archaeological digs, it's amazing what people find out about those who are still telling us about themselves long after they died by what they left behind with them.

Ron


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