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A Mind's Captivity

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

It’s apparent now, that disease of dumbing us down has become a pandemic. (Image by Odin AI)

Thursday, March 26, 2026


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 A Mind’s Captivity

 

 

Screens glow like obedient moons,
hovering just above the nightstand,
a constellation of curated noise
dripping soft blue syrup into the room.
Each pixel a tiny salesman,
hawking shortcuts to thought,
whispering Don’t think too hard… we’ve already done it for you.

 

Across the ceiling,
my wandering imagination,once a bright red comet,
now crawls like a stunned beetle, legs confused

by the sugar-slick gravity of endless headlines looping themselves
like carnival rides no one should stay on too long.

 

My pencil lies beside me,
a thin wooden relic,
a buried antenna waiting to tune into an older, quieter frequency.
It watches as the screen’s glow pours itself into my pupils
like a slow anesthetic.

 

The spider in the corner
descends on its silver thread
the way a thought used to,
unexpected, precise, deliberate.
It pauses midair,
unimpressed by the algorithmic haze filling the room like stale theater fog.

 

How easily media embalms a restless mind,
wrapping it in soft gauze of recycled opinions,
mass-produced outrage,
and the warm hum of someone else’s conclusions.


It is a gentle lobotomy, administered in high definition.

Beneath this quiet suffocation,
the parrot of imitation shrieks,
its feathers neon with borrowed phrases,
its beak sharpened on commentary it never questioned.
It squawks until even my doubts sound secondhand.

 

But then…


A rebellious breeze sneaks through the cracked window,
ruffling the curtains like a stage cue.
The spider sways, pendulum-like, measuring the air’s sudden clarity.

And the pencil,that humble wooden insurgent,
leans toward my hand as if recognizing the moment
when silence finally punctures the static.

 

Tonight, perhaps,
I’ll switch off the moons,
let the comet wake,
and carve from the dark a thought unchained.

 

 



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Reviewed by Diana Legun
Reviewed on April 25, 2026
Rip Van Winkle wakes up in the Authors Den and this is her first read. Exactly where I’ve been, the long-term AWOL, is where you’ve captured, Odin, in this one of the many writings following ‘A Mind’s Captivity,’ and I sink into each and every single line. This could not, in my imagination, be more descriptive of our global human condition in this moment. The contrast of ‘what was’ (the pencil) and ‘what is’ (the noise, the screen, the loss of reality) is masterfully revealed by you. So many lines here to cherish that I won’t name a one. God Save The Queen, because the Kings are the wrong gender. I’m happy to see you write of the ‘pencil,’ because that elemental writing instrument is the return to sanity. Your writing shows you still have yours. It makes me want to find mine again. Thank you, Odin ~~ djl

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 28, 2026
Some great metaphors and similes in this one. Deriding the "anesthetic" of the media, for the simpler life where ideas came the hard way from hard thinking rather than mellowly placed on our minds by subliminal advertising.

Or could it just be the malady of old age where future shock has started to settle in.

While working, I shut off all other distractions that I can. And make use of all the means possible for me to get the news, laugh at people in reality situations, and just relax for a while every day in meaningless tasks like games, so that my brain can recharge for the next time I need it to think for me.

Ron

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on March 26, 2026
Your poem captures that eerie drift between agency and surrender with unsettling precision. The “obedient moons” and “tiny salesmen” feel less like metaphors and more like diagnoses of a culture lulled into passivity. What struck me most is the way you contrast the artificial glow with the older, organic instruments of thought—the spider descending with intention, the pencil leaning forward like a conspirator. That shift from suffocation to the faint stirring of rebellion is beautifully earned. The final gesture toward “a thought unchained” feels like the quiet beginning of recovery, not just for the speaker but for anyone who recognizes themselves in this captivity.


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