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Craquelure Aging

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

Recently, after proofing and editing a book for my pulisher, I took score on the signs of my again. Given that I’ve been fortunate to have some thankful genes that have kept a telltale aging appearance to a minimum. Curiousity sent me on an exploration of what life styles and habits add or subtract from the agin process. (Image by Odin AI)

Wednesday, April 1, 2026


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 Craquelure Aging

 

 

I.
Time begins as a glaze laid warm across the face,
milk-smooth porcelain, kiln-bright, ringing when tapped.


Then come the habits, invisible hands at the surface:
sleep honored or stolen, water chosen or sugar poured.
Some mornings arrive with lungs rinsed clean as rain glass,
others with breath tasting of ash and debt.
The first fractures appear like frost-veins on a pond,
not yet broken, only forecast.

 

II.
There are lives lived under constant combustion,
fluorescent nights, drive‑through salt, stress clenched like a subservient jaw.
Skin dries into droughted earth, riverbeds split open, while inside,

organs swell like overfed engines.
Fat wraps the heart in pale insulation,
the liver clouds, the blood thickens to traffic.
Craquelure grows loud here, each widening crack fed by smoke, sugar, sitting still too long.

 

III.
Others move with measured flame and shade:
meals that look like color wheels,
feet that strike ground more often than brakes.
Muscles stay elastic, the metabolism hums,
and fat learns when to leave.


Their faces take on wood-grain lines, not breaks,
creases pressed in by laughter, sun filtered through leaves.
Disease circles them like weather, not destiny.

 

IV.
And still—look to the heron, iron-legged in the marsh,
unchanged across decades of patient standing;
the trout, silver and swift until almost the end;
the oak, thickening, not collapsing, with age.


After maturity, they hold their form,
little decay until the final brief season,
or none that the eye can mourn.
So we ask, not softly now: if we are the so‑called superior species,
why do so many of us crack early, sicken inwardly, carry our excess like anchors,
while the rest of life sails on, continuing to learn how not to break?

 

 

 

 

 

 



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Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on April 4, 2026
Interesting how you lay out how time writes itself into us. I especially like the contrast between the lives that crack and the lives that deepen into grain. The closing question has real force — a quiet challenge to live in better alignment with ourselves. Beautifully done.

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on April 2, 2026
As to your last question: genetic predisposition, pollutants in the environment, eating wrong, not enough of the right kinds of fluids, bad lifestyles, cigarettes, too much booze, stress, etc. An interesting use of words too, in the title: "Craquelure" more associated with the hairline cracks that form in the surface of old paintings than the face of humans. Works though. Clever. As to being a superior species: I was cheering and crying when Artemis 2 launched yesterday. An incredible achievement. Enjoyed the lament. Hope you're well. r


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