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Intentionally Carving One's Breath

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

To have lived a life knowing the only way one might keep breathing was to live intentionally and challenge throughout the span of years, never fearing, although at times concerned, yet always with the Mindfullness belief that “You are always exactly where you need to be.” Well, moving toward the end, one just may progress with a perpetual smile on each inhalation, even to the last breath. (Image by Odin AI)

Sunday, April 5, 2026


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 Intentionally Carving One’s Breath

 

Start small.
Drink the water as if today is the only cup.
Stand in the sunlight a second longer
before naming the hour useful.
Do not wait,
tie intention into the most ordinary acts,
and let this breath be chosen, not automatic.

 

Next, stop pretending you need tomorrow’s map.
Step where the fog still connects the ground to air.
Say yes without rehearsal,
walk out of jobs, habits, loves that already know their ending.
Live for today deliberately,
uncertain, awake, and unconventional by refusing the alone state.

 

With years, risk thickens.
You lend your chest to causes that may never praise you,
break yourself open for work that gives nothing back but resistance.
You sacrifice reputation, comfort, even safety,
because allowing life to merely happen is a greater violence than losing it.


Your breath now burns, but its flame leans forward.

And when the last edge arrives,
you do not gasp or beg the air for mercy.
You do not perform fear.
You carve one final breath with steady hands,
reach where no one dared the risk before,
and release it cleanly,
merely breathing freedom,

 having never waited to live.

 



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Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on April 6, 2026
Kent: This is stunning! And brimming with life, love, and respect for your readers. My impulse is to download it, frame it, and place it right next to a narrative of my own career that someone penned for me. It could stand the touch of class that you carry so well. ed.

Reviewed by John Herlihy
Reviewed on April 5, 2026
A brief treatise with a powerful message on living with intention. I love how the poem moves from small, mindful acts to the courage of risking everything for a fully lived life. The final breath carved with steadiness feels both fearless and deeply earned. "Merely breathing freedom" because a person has lived in freedom. Nicely expressed.


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