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Reveries' Dance Card

by Odin odin@aflx.com — Read all 3,869 poems by Odin odin@aflx.com

The joy of thinking and the rewards of such activity are surprisingly avoided by some. There are those who decry the process as too much “work.” Perhaps it is because to think is to make choices, and the lessor choices are often ashamedly avoided, never considered, easily leading to exhaustion. But, in the grand scheme of things, balance will always triumph, given opposites will always be dependent on the other in order to be. And lest we forget, harmony is forever fluctuating, always welcoming its own change. (Image by Odin AI)

Thursday, April 9, 2026


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 Reveries’ Dance Card

 

 

Morning begins simply,
a coffee cup sweating on the counter,
the radio clearing its throat.


Outside, a sparrow startles at its shadow
like the world has just coughed.
Phones blink awake with headlines
stacked like overturned furniture,
but the sink still drips,

and light still finds the dust
floating as if nothing has changed.

 

By midday the air grows crowded.
Sirens braid with stock tickers,
satellites whisper over our roofs,
maps flare red like fevers under glass.


We scroll until our thumbs ache,
trying to read smoke as scripture,
trying to remember
when language became shrapnel.
Every border feels provisional,
every sentence loaded,
history pacing the room
like a big animal deciding whether to charge.

 

Then…


The afternoon fractures.
Sky split by contrails like chalk marks
on a blackboard no one can erase.
Drums of outrage pound through cables,
missiles rehearsed as metaphors,
hands hover over buttons
the way storms pause before breaking trees.
The planet feels over-wound,
a music box cranked past mercy,
each nation a lit match
pretending it’s only checking the flame.

 

Evening comes anyway.
At the table, someone I love laughs
with their mouth full of bread.
A dish clinks; a candle gutters but stays.
Up close, the ordinary glows,
warm hands, shared salt, a dog’s sigh
as if the world were still trustworthy.
It isn’t certainty, only a pilot light,
but history has stumbled like this before
and somehow caught its balance.


I cup the flame without owning it,
and for tonight,
that is enough to keep the dark polite,

letting me see beyond the shadows.



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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on April 10, 2026
You certainly were thinking passionately while writing this this romp through a day in the life of that everyone reading can relate somewhat to.

I find myself doing passionate thinking in daydreams and in lightly dreams waiting the whole stories of real life concern.

But just thinking? I rarely do it, unless I'm trying to solve some problem that presents itself and needs to be worked through. Occasionally though, a song gets stuck in my head.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on April 10, 2026
"letting me see beyond the shadows." We're a culture who is struggling more and more now to see beyond ourselves. As Plato proffered: "Those who are able to see beyond the shadows and lies of their culture will never be understood, let alone believed by the masses." The burgeoning hatred in our world is not only destroying people inwardly, but also outwardly, and creating the kinds of dark shadows that will eventually destroy us, if something does not put all of it back into check. I hear and relate to the spirit of this piece. Reminding me once again that if we keep our eyes towards the Light, the shadows will fall behind us. Thank you for sharing. Hope you're well. Enjoyed. r


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