Bill, this is an awesome poem. Your talent soars! I will be reading more of you.
~Linda
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2005
Bill,
excellent Poem , because I believe Janis Joplin when we said;
'It's all the same day Man!' Tomorrow never happens.(paradox?)
All VALLEYS ,EVERY CREEK WILL REMAIN , WHEN MY SPARKS ARE ASHES!"'
Outstanding and exceptional bill!!!
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez
I can totally relate to your verses as you will see if you read some of my "stuff." I also live in the midst of "glory" as you put it, and I feel like such a "screw up" because there's so much "other stuff" that seems to get in the way of my enjoying it. Great write. Thank you for sharing this poetic offering. If you are new to the Den, welcome. Love and peace. Regis
~Linda
Bill,
excellent Poem , because I believe Janis Joplin when we said;
'It's all the same day Man!' Tomorrow never happens.(paradox?)
All VALLEYS ,EVERY CREEK WILL REMAIN , WHEN MY SPARKS ARE ASHES!"'
Outstanding and exceptional bill!!!
peace',
Rich Criso Suarez
excellent poem ....