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Behind Those Eyes
by Lisa Hilbers → (All Poetry by Lisa Hilbers)
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Behind Those Eyes


I saw in your eyes, the flowing of
peaceful pastels-
The vibrance of sizzlin' hot pinks;
glowing oranges; and the haunting
of vacant sea shells-


I saw in your eyes, a future
yet to be told-
A past that could re-write history;
spread thick with layers of stubbornness;
uniquely bold


I found where you hide; and where
you create-
I saw in your eyes, a passion for
life; living and dying-
and I felt your anxiousness; and
dared your knowledge of fate


I fell into the cracks, of your
dirty sidewalk thoughts-
Your stained-glass memories; of broken
dreams and schemes-
And I saw in your eyes; the silly smirk,
when you got caught


Somewhere far behind those eyes,
there's a spirit breaking free-
A soul tangled in a web of popcorn
garlands; Timeless frantic fits;
Somewhere behind those eyes;
is where I'll find; Me


© Lisa Hilbers
6/15/05


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 Reviews of "Behind Those Eyes"
Reviewed by Chanti Niven
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
Fantastic imagery and a very impactful last line. Good stuff Lisa!
Chanti

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega
Reviewed on June 17, 2005
Awakening to love is wonderful, but we can only reach so deep into each others hearts no matter how close to each other we long to be,for are allwe separate and lost in our own lonliness and understanding

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
Excellent write this one Lisa

Paul;-}

Reviewed on June 16, 2005
Lisa,

Stunning imagery, stunning write--this is my new favorite of yours (and there are many). Strength is the underlying message in your words--thank you, Poet and friend! DEFINATELY a keeper (as many of yours are in my library). :)

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. *applause!*

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
The eyes have it--mirrors to the soul.

Ron

Reviewed on June 16, 2005
beautiful stuff, lisa; very well done! brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in burleson, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
Splendid poetry Lisa!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on June 16, 2005
Your usual grace with the pen shines here, Lisa. And thank you for that kind review. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
I love the twist that you applied at the end of this, Lisa. Your poem is poetic perfection, with depth, an interesting and strong rhyme scheme, and a story line that I found to be captivating. It is always a pleasure to read your poems. Each one stands alone in its uniqueness and its glory. I find it so hard to believe that you are the same writer I started reading a couple of years ago. Your growth as a writer has been not only astounding and quick but also a direct path to literary excellence.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
This touches deep somewhere in my own soul as well, Lisa. Somtimes we know we have other persons inside us that we can only release in the tiniest ways. It would be nice if every now and then we could set them free and just see what the results would be. Anyway as always a thought provoking piece.

Felix

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
Looking at the person in the looking glass.

You are carving out some masterpieces.
Top drawer Lisa...

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
Splendid write of self examination.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
Fantastic write! Many will be able to relate to this :-)

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
Fascinating poem Lisa, A unique and brilliant write!
A treat for all of us!

Eileen

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
Paints a biography of iron will and resolve Lisa
" Be true to yourself " is the undying mantra of life
Peter

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 15, 2005
Gotta love it! And I do. Great job.


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