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You Know Who I'm Talkin' 'Bout
by Lisa Hilbers → (All Poetry by Lisa Hilbers)
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You Know Who I'm Talkin' 'Bout


You know who I'm talkin' 'bout;
I forget his name-
That guy that once worked with wood-
for a shy amount of gain
He went on to much greater things;
so many stories told-
I once heard he walked on water-
some found that absurd
Then the one about the fish;
with three he fed a crowd-
Some would follow him anywhere-
and when he spoke; They bowed
They said he gave sound back to the deaf;
and restored sight for the blind-
Healed the crippled; They walked again-
Turned water into wine
He had twelve he sent to spread;
his message all about-
But some were not as faithful-
and they would sell him out
Some he frightened with his words;
they couldn't let him live-
His trial and torture would begin-
for forgiveness to them; he'd give
I hear they hung him from a cross;
drove nails through his hands-
On his head a crown of thorns-
How much could he stand?
They said his name was Jesus;
His Father's Only Son-
and he died there on that cross-
for the sins of everyone
His blood would stain the wood;
as tears fell that day-
From all the eyes that sadly watched-
to Heaven he found his way
You know who I'm talkin' 'bout;
The One that works with souls-
I believe His name is Jesus-
and He died to make us whole


© Lisa Hilbers
11/20/2005


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 Reviews of "You Know Who I'm Talkin' 'Bout"
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on November 22, 2005
superbly crafted and high-spirited poem ...

Reviewed on November 21, 2005
Lisa,

A strongly penned, beautiful tribute to our Lord and Saviour, Jesus. Yep. Do know who you're talkin' 'bout, THANK GOD!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on November 20, 2005
Lisa:

This is great! A well-written piece that is easily understood.

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2005
Now that is neat!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 20, 2005
Very spiritual and passionate write about a subject that you believe strongly in.

Felix

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on November 20, 2005
Lisa,

Nice spiritual spark here. Great work.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on November 20, 2005
I know who you're talikn' 'bout. thanks for a poem that brings me closer to my faith, Lisa. Dawn

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on November 20, 2005
What a marvelous story/poem this is, Lisa. You tell the story well and yet, I must wonder why people continue to doubt his existance, his motives and his power. To those who don't believe in faith because it enatails acceptance of something that is not physically tangible, I present to the the question of Love. Do you believe in love? Most likely you do, can you touch it, can you see it, smell it, hear it? The answer is most assuredly "No." How can love be real if faith is not? Wonderful work!!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on November 20, 2005
A story that has been told over and over again and still there are the doubting Thomases.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on November 20, 2005
You make a great story teller!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 20, 2005
Thee most powerful story ever sis!!

Thanks for this reminder!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 20, 2005
Lisa, this shines as it should, coming from the light you have within! A masterful poem!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Tami Ryan
Reviewed on November 20, 2005
An excellent piece, Lisa. So good to read you again. I've missed your terrific work.

Hugs,
Tami


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