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I'll Walk This Way Again
by Lisa Hilbers → (All Poetry by Lisa Hilbers)
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I'll Walk This Way Again


 


Stoic and stately I stood in the falling leaves;
Allowing them to exfoliate my soul-
I had been here before- With you-
And I would walk this way again- But
For now; I must follow a pathway new


I have doubt in multiple dimensions;
and here alone; I so feel-
I dropped in only to find you gone-
The ground was as hard as the stone;
that bore your name-
The date; The sonnet; The final song


Not yet Winter; Though cold and quiet;
your whispers fell softly at my feet-
The placed roses had died; Withered away-
They deserved equal respect-
Like us; Their billing faded much too soon-
All just a memory in the words I pray


Rain can wash through the footprints;
that I've left beside your grave-
But it will never wipe away the sorrow-
I can't help this feeling of suffocation; Maybe
its just the season; Or maybe not-
I've no more inner strength to borrow


While the bells toll in echoes;
Ringing through the trees; Above-
These tears I sob; Continue gently down;
Oh they aren't for you; Nor, are they for me;
But for the passing of the roses-
And the new pathway found


Yes; I'll walk this way again;
I'll stand in the footprints beside you-
Painful tears will fall; Like the leaves of today-
The placed roses will once again wither and fade;
I'll take your hand; With sorrow no more-
And we'll stroll together, that golden pathway


© Lisa Hilbers
11/30/2005


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 Reviews of "I'll Walk This Way Again"
Reviewed on December 2, 2005
*tears* You did it again--you have POWER in your pen! Excellent!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Betty Torain (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
Your POEM made me cry. It moved me to write a poem that I have been avoiding. Beautiful write and thanks for sharing. Betty

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on December 1, 2005
well done

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
This poem bellows a haunting echo in the deepest part of the soul, Lisa. Losing those we love is a pain that never lessens. Part of us knows we must go on and another part of us longs for the day when we will be together again. Like the recalled fragrance of the final rose of summer as winter withers the vine from which it grew, so the heart recalls the taste of loving that special someone and longs for the season when, once again, their paths will cross and their spirits will join. Beautiful and touching write, gracefully composed.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
Heartfelt write... paths are so unpredictable..and the right one are always hard.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
Lisa this goes to the depths of ones soul in remembrance of the loved ones who have passed on! I shiver with even just the touch of emotions you were feeling when you wrote this, exquisite sad poem!
My thoughts go out to you...
Love ,
Eileen

Reviewed by White Dove left (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
Moving and touching too, Lisa

Catherine):

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
A reader would have to be made of ice not to be touched deeply by this passionate write that tells of loss, bittersweet as it is but also of the hope for a future that will reunite two hearts someday as one.

Felix

Reviewed on November 30, 2005
Lisa,

Very moving and heart touching write; as always, a super job! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
Very moving offering Lisa!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
What a soulful piece Lisa. I really love the opening lines as they really set the mood for the rest to follow. Hope, Dream and Love are there to keep us going.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by sarah playle (Reader)
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
Very emotional, but beautiful. Sometimes the best poems come from the sadest situations.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
nicely written and so heartfelt

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on November 30, 2005
Very moving and touching indeed Lisa
Peter


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