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Nothing Holy
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Nothing Holy


 


Roads lined, oh but not with gold,
and there was nothing holy about the
agony in their hearts, or the emptiness
on their faces and the darkness in their eyes-


Flowers; Beautiful flowers, all in stunning colors
that should have been outlining gardens of kings and
queens, yet this day they soaked only the sadness, of
the loved ones left and forced to go forward alone-


There was nothing holy, as the day's sunset faded into
night, as a Mother lay holding her confused child in her arms;
Knowing the only thing left of her Father, was the scent on his pillow, and
the clothes hanging carelessly in the closet-


There were tender touches, from family, friends and strangers, but
they were not his; There were prayers, but they weren't from his
lips, in his voice- There was cards and letters, but they weren't signed
in his almost unreadable handwriting- So none of them were holy, oh
not in her mind-


She knew there was war, and it was not holy, no matter who said
it was-
She knew there was death; and it was not holy; It was just final.


© Lisa Hilbers
2/22/2006


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "Nothing Holy"
Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on February 22, 2006
Your last line says it all, Lisa. There is nothing holy about war and there is nothing sacred about the deaths that result from it. It is a sad situation, but I wonder if mankind will ever rise above it. This is a strong and poignant write, Lisa and your words cut like a knife through the haze of "all is well" when deep within we each know that nothing could be further from the truth. Exceptional poeming, it is great to see a post from you.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on February 22, 2006
Excellent write and beautiful picture! BRAVA, Lisa!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed on February 22, 2006
Lisa,

This is heartfelt poetry at its absolute best; well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 22, 2006
Exceptional write on the finality of war.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 22, 2006
Deep meaningful touching poem Lisa!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 22, 2006
Another amazing powerfully touching poem from your exceptional gifted pen, Lisa! Our hope lies in the fact that Creator knows what is and is not holy! Amen!

eT

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 22, 2006
Deep meaningful write that reaches inside the heart of a child and talks in her voice about an irreplacable loss of someone she loved.

Felix

Reviewed by John Bidwell
Reviewed on February 22, 2006
Breath taking, not holy-just final.
Awesome work.
John

Reviewed on February 22, 2006
So heartbreaking, so true and so beautiful!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2006
Beautifully done, Lisa.
I am always amazed at the courage of the men and women who bear the burdens of wars, and have great sadness for those left behind. You've certainly honored them in this work.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 22, 2006
It is the ones left behind who carry on the pain. I do hope they are not confused as to why the life had to be given. We may not call it holy, but the fanatical mullahs think it is and that is good enough for me. Very nice poetry.

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on February 22, 2006
Very touching and sentimental Lisa
We should honor not only those who are prepared to put their lives on the line to defend the Homeland, but also their suffering and forebearing families, who pine for their loved ones in their absence !
The picture is gorgeous, with those sea of purple flowers, and I always come away from your Den revitilised, knowing your are prepared to have the courage of your convictions, and stand up for all that is good and worth preserving in our God forsaken society !
Blessings
Peter


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