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Half-Step
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Half-Step

 

 

Peace.
A moment in time when the thunder stops;
and the battle halts, maybe only for that very second-
It’s a breath that only warriors can breath;
A rest, only they can rest-
A strength only they can muster, and a tear only
they have the right to cry

 

For each of them know, the next step forward,
will find them right back in the war-
Right back where they were; Just thirty seconds before.

 

A place where time has no hands; No sound to
inundate its worthiness-
It has become yesterday, today and forever, all within
the same melting frame.

 

There’s no filters on what they see and feel; There’s only
raw pain and flesh-
They aren’t angry; Oh but how they’d like to be-
Just one more emotion, added to the mix

 

Words inadequate; Conversations stand quietly aside,
The look on their faces, and the tiredness in their eyes,
It tells so much more; So much more

 

They began to search for that half-step to peace,
the calm before the storm; and the drawstring of strength
only they can pull; It’s the sweet smell in memories
of home

 

Peace.
A moment in time when the thunder stops;
and the battle halts, maybe only for that very second-
It’s a breath only warriors can breath;
A rest only they can rest-
Strength only they can muster, and a tear only they
have the right to cry

 
 
 


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 Reviews of "Half-Step"
Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on April 13, 2006
Very deep and meaningful poem.

Reviewed on March 26, 2006
A most touching poem, a wonderful write, Lisa!
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on March 25, 2006
Peace...will it ever be? The combination of that photo and your words is powerful. You speak of what is, simply is in reality. Beyond borders, colors or creeds and it tears at the heart. I'm glad you visited my den, Lisa and that I have been introduced to your poetry...

Lin

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 25, 2006
an excellent account of the soldier's inner desire for peace while in the midst of war ...

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
Lisa, no one can write so beautifuly as you do about war..It's simply a masterpiece each time I visist your works...


(((((hugs and love, joanne )))))

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
Powerful poetry Lisa!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
Stark and powerful poem, as if a voice of the men in the trenches...outstanding writing
love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
Very deep dramatic write, the picture set the opening stage and your word imagery took us deeper and deeper into a world most of us can't imagine. Thank you for always keeping our thoughts and a special place in our hearts for these brave men and women who serve.

Felix

Reviewed by Jennifer Butler (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
And that is why they kept that Ten Commandments thing: "Thou shalt not kill."

Reviewed on March 24, 2006
Powerful writing, Lisa; very well done! BRAVA; and God bless our troops! They need our support!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
The raw emotion paintied in this poem caused my heart to skip a beat as though I were breathing in that fetid, smokey air that reeked of war, knowing that taking a break, for even a moment, was apt to bring on a bit of weakness. It gets harder each time, to stand up and head back into the fight, though the silence has become more frightening than the sounds of battle. Excellent poem, Lisa. Your work just keeps getting stronger and stronger.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed on March 24, 2006
Lisa,

Powerful, powerful look at what soldiers experience; very well penned. I want a copy of the book when it comes out.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
Insightful write on the regors of war on a soldier.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on March 24, 2006
When you get your book published, and everything is a perfect as you know how to get it, send it to ALL TV talk shows and I mean all, that you possibly can. The book is predestined to become a success beyond your wildest dreams, but you have to push it,. You have to become aggressive. I am not doing that on "fairy!: A Cautionary Tale" as yet, but I shall. Oh. The poem. So insightful that it tears at my heart, Lisa.


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