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Time
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Time


 


How many times? Yes, How many times
will it stop before it’s gone forever? Never
to return to us- To me? To you? To all
of humanity?  I ask, How many?
Will we wake, (or will we at all)
one day and find it has swallowed
our entire world?  In one big gulp, and
never choked?
Then smiled, picking its shiny white teeth,
before it rested on the moonbeams bright
and fair, it has now claimed as its own?
Oh how sad. It’s sad I say…
I say this to you, and to you, Oh,
and to…
and to Me. And to Me, as I stand merrily
today in the plush garden of time, surrounded
by the breathtaking beauty of nature--
Of Time- 
How can it be so cruel? So innocent? So
important, that we can’t exist without it, yet
it can and will still exist, without us?  (Or will it at all?)
Will it wake and find it too will and can feel
the cold shoulder of sadness..
Aloneness in the darkness of its own non-existence?
Time?


 


© Lisa Hilbers


 


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 Reviews of "Time"
Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on September 27, 2006
Your work reminds me of the song..."time in a bottle..."

Enjoyed.

Reviewed on July 3, 2006
This is a fantastic write on time!
B&R

Reviewed on June 29, 2006
I'm set back with amazement over the depth and multitude of meanings lieing here in. Three steps above most others in quality.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 26, 2006
Another brilliant poem Lisa! Your treatment of time is fascinating.

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM
Reviewed on June 26, 2006
A marker, an index, a way to align occurances in our lives...time doesn't mean much as long as we believe it to be on our side but once that table has turned, we tend to think of time as our adversary, as if it truly was stealing something from us. If we make the best of the time we have, time won't seem like so much of an enemy. Perhaps time is an illusion or perhaps we have the ability to be living in parallel time...I am not sure we will ever understand it but we are certainly all intrigued by it...so much so that we even wear "timepieces" so we always know exactly what time it "actually" is...Very cool write, Lisa. You tossed out a lot for us to chew on.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 26, 2006
A thought provoking piece!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 26, 2006
A somber thought process indeed.

The image of time picking its shiny white teeth was brilliant.

Richard

Reviewed on June 26, 2006
Excellent words you pen today, Lisa; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :)

Reviewed on June 26, 2006
Thought provoking questions you pen in excellent verse, Lisa, well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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