Sitting within the afternoon shadows, feeling the coolness of the breeze against my cheeks- I glance through the tall pines in search for you, I can almost touch your face; Feel your warm breath;
Taste your sweetness from where I am; Where you are- When the moments are right, I can still feel your caring hand slip about my waist, pulling me close- Oh it’s wonderful to know you are here-
So peaceful; So serene; The evening skies fill with color; pink, lavender and blues- One can rest in the beauty and splendor of the season. A sprinkle of slightly turned leaves; I brush them aside, but never away- They, like you allow me to turn night into day; Death into life; and dreams into reality- They’ve granted me hope when otherwise there would be none- They clear my pathways, and open hand-carved rough oak doors to a grand future-
One by one, tiny candles are lit by unseen spirits- as night falls, they glow from the heavens, radiating a blanket thick of gentle love- I know I can hear your voice; For I am listening- I can’t help but think of all the times we’ve shared dreams- Felt the joy; the overwhelming enthusiasm as we cheered for more- We sipped ice-cold lemonade; One glass two straws- Once in a while, I’d reach and squeeze your hand, and you’d smile- then return to the dream we shared
This is beautiful and so touching, Lisa, a wistful love poem to someone dear. Your love is evident here as it's written from the very soul. Wonderful imagery, accomplished writing.
Love,
CJ
This is so alive, Lisa, it was like a scene from a movie unfolding before my eyes; you images are intense and clear and your mood soothing, longing, and perhaps even a bit bittersweet. I love this piece as you transformed me from my desk to that beautiful place, sitting on a large rock and feeling the presence of a love that outlasts time. I will be saving this, thank you Lisa, for bringing me such beautiful mood.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 14, 2006
I think it's all been said..
Hope all is well...
xoxox
You have created and shared the mood most effectively; and the photo very nicely complements the whole offering. Thank you, Lisa. Love and peace to you,
This is exquisitely tender, moving poetry of regret? loneliness? Missing a passed loved one? I felt this one deep in my soul....powerful gift of verse, beautifully illustrated in word and graphic.
Lisa this is stunningly beutiful. I can see your vivid images in my mind and feel your love and spirit warm my heart. To share a love this special that it is seen in the heavens eternally is a great gift. Warm and passionate.
Fee
Under Amber Skies, written by author and poet Jill Eisnaugle, is a wonderful collection of rhyming poetry guaranteed to please every reader. In this, her second book, she writes of new friendships kindled, as well as old friendships solidified. She g
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
Love,
CJ
Elizabeth
Take care,
Sherry
Hope all is well...
xoxox
Regis
very intimately written
a sharing and reaching for???
thats the mystery :)
Susan
Why do my emails to you keep getting sent back?
This is exquisitely tender, moving poetry of regret? loneliness? Missing a passed loved one? I felt this one deep in my soul....powerful gift of verse, beautifully illustrated in word and graphic.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Eileen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D
Fee