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Don't Want Me to Tell It, but...
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       Don't Want Me to Tell It, but..

Jesus didn't have mimes or dancers.

He spoke God's Word from His heart.

He prayed earnest prayers to His Father

in the quiet of the night.

Didn't take up collection,

sell Dvds, Cds,

or play host to rappers and mimes.

Jesus sacrificed His life for the sinner

and self-proclaimed saints.

No human is perfect in God's eyes.

Yet, by nature, human-kind kindle fires of

criticism and condemnation,

reeking hypocrisy

through committees, accolades,

and just one more prize.

 

bjd

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Don't Want Me to Tell It, but..."
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on March 3, 2010
YOU ARE RIGHT! WHEN IT COMES RIGHT DOWN TO IT...WE ALL NEED 'CLEANING'(FROM THE PULPIT TO THE DOORS)...EVERY DAY OF OUR LIVES...OVER AND OVER AGAIN. NO QUESTION ABOUT IT, THIS WORK 'HIT THE NAIL ON THE HEAD'. THANKS FOR SHARING BRENN AND BLESSINGS. LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 23, 2009
How absolutely true, no gimmicks of any kind, nice writing....

Be always safe,
Karen


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