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Blackout
by Brenda Joy Dobson → (All Poetry by Brenda Joy Dobson)
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Awareness, a good thing, after bad.

                                            

Satin blouse raised up around her face,

lace panties down around her ankles,

she lay there,  bruised, scratched.

She sits up in the darkness,

tall grass shields her

as she reaches out,

running her hands through wetness

in search of her wranglers.

Voices and footsteps nearby,

she crouches down again, hiding

her nakedness, until they are gone.

No knowledge of the hour,

her heart pounds fiercely.

"What's happened to me?

Where am I,"  she whines?

On hands and knees,

she scours the ground

for remenents of herself,

jacket, scarf...yes, finally,

torn, wrinkled wranglers.

Scrambling about,

she must make things right

before anyone sees her there,

in a country cornfield, stripped of

sorority-dignity,

silken-hair all a mess.

With stars as her only witnesses,

she whispers, "Tomorrow I'll stop drinking."

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 Reviews of "Blackout"
Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on February 5, 2010
WOW! YOU KNOW YOU PICKED ME UP FROM THE FIRST WORD IN THE FIRST LINE AND I COULDN'T EVEN STOP MY EYES FROM FEVERISHLY PICKING UP THE WORDS AS THEY RAN FROM LINE TO LINE SO PERFECTLY. THIS IS A TREMENDOUS WORK...SO VIVID AND AND SO STRONG. A MOVIE THAT I NEVER SAW...BUT HOW I WISH I COULD. WHY? BECAUSE THEN I COULD HOPE TO SEE A HAPPY ENDING...'CAUSE...'TOMORROW' IS NOT GOOD ENOUGH. THANK YOU BRENDA YOU HAVE SHARED ONE OF YOUR BEST. GOD BLESS. LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on January 31, 2010
Desiring to sample your poetry, I came to this one first. I don't read "R" rated, as a general rule, but I sensed from the beginning that this was worthwhile reading.
It's a sad story you have chronicled, so sad. I know a girl personally who had a terrible experience of this nature while drinking at a party.
You are talented in poetry, so let me go and read more now.
Connie


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