You fiend for it
It no longer courses though your veins
You fiend for it
Like dry earth prays for rain
You fiend for it
Even though it has taken your pride
You fiend for it
It will not leave your mind
You're fiending and you're dying
Slowly showing who you are
You're faltering and you're falling
Just starring up at the stars
You fiend for it
Talking circles all the time
You fiend for it
Lying when you say you're fine
You fiend for it
But you won't be satisfied
You fiend for it
Your unloved heart has died
I doubt that anyone could live without love. There exist a fine line between reality and fantasy which we all walk every day of our lives. You are a good writer with an awesome mind. Don't ever let anyone take the fantasy away from you. Peace and Blessings Always, Paul.
Great job, kiddo!! Only 17?? WOW!! I'm impressed!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Welcome to the Den; you're among friends!
Reviewed by 000 000 (Reader)
Reviewed on October 9, 2008
Hi little one
This is very well written..from one so young. You have captured the hurts of Love as an elder would. Continue your writing journey as you are talented. I will enjoy reading more.
CarolHawks
A further collection of poems, many from years in the Middle East, but also the California San Francisco and Central Coast areas (Santa Cruz, Carmel, Big Sur, Berkeley, etc.).
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I doubt that anyone could live without love. There exist a fine line between reality and fantasy which we all walk every day of our lives. You are a good writer with an awesome mind. Don't ever let anyone take the fantasy away from you. Peace and Blessings Always, Paul.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Welcome to the Den; you're among friends!
This is very well written..from one so young. You have captured the hurts of Love as an elder would. Continue your writing journey as you are talented. I will enjoy reading more.
CarolHawks
Be always safe,
Karen