I was looking for you. (poem) by Tonya I on AuthorsDen

I was looking for you.
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30/06/2004

I was looking for you in my dreams, I was looking for you without any means I was just looking, realising what could be I was looking at a world removed from reality You walked into my life How and for what reason I cannot explain now I was looking for you though, Through so many nights, I had to fight my worst fears, That is the loneliness of the night Sometimes I want to wake up But then I realise I�m not dreaming, When you are stood by me You convey the feeling, My emotions you fulfil And my feelings you nurture With every step I take you seem to be my guide The world is not so big I now face it with pride My steps that I take are braver For I know I have you to stand by me no matter what You�ll cover me with a blanket when I get cold And you�ll make me laugh when the world will begin to fall You�ll walk with me to the end, even when the road will seem to never end.

Reviewed by Marie Wadsworth

Reviewed on August 15, 2004

filled with heartbreak, regrets and longing. Such innocence and emotions tingling in this. liked the flow. this shows the circle of love. delightful read.

Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr

Reviewed on July 2, 2004

Loved the ending as a true friend or lover should walk to the end no matter how long and never ending the road is.
Very nice!!
Tommy

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on June 29, 2004

This is so you and beautiful emotive and excellent..

LP

Reviewed by Amelia Peterson (Reader)

Such comfort knowing someone is there beside you.

Reviewed by Pier Tyler

This is a splendid write. I think we all have had those feelings at one time or another. You convey them well here. Thanks for sharing this wih us.

Hugs,
Pier

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Great write. I especially like the final stanza.