(21.05.2003)
Peggy, honey, ThankYou so so much! i really cannot stop thanking you enough.. it is the sweetest thing anyone could do! All my love goes out to you.. Thank You!
Look into my eyes.
What do you see?
Do you see life,
Sunshine, stars and the moonlight,
Do you see happiness,
Do you see darkness,
Do you see hurt and faithfullness,
Do you see what I see?
Take my hand.
What do you feel?
Do you feel love,
Do you feel tenderness,
Do you feel longing,
Do you feel fear,
Do you feel what I feel?
Kiss my lips.
What's going through your mind,
Is it blue sky and flowers
You picture in front,
Is it my smile leading your happiness,
Is it ecstasy tasting my taste,
Do you think what I think?
Simplicity of all this
Is merely a struggling thought,
The final question to all this,
Requires no concern...
Are you a part of my soul?
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Reviewed by Ashraf Goreja (Reader)
Reviewed on December 3, 2003
Quite nice poem.
Greetings.
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Reviewed by Andrew Ford
Reviewed on June 1, 2003
Very impressed. You really captured my heart whilst reading that one. I had to make a comment. I hope you have the one your soul goes out to. Someone will see you as very special one day. Speak to their heart the same way you spoke to mine. All my love. Andrew Ford.
Reviewed by Lady Peg
Reviewed on May 30, 2003
wont miss one of these gems again I put you down on my tracker {{{SMILES}}}}
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 30, 2003
Hi Sweetie,
I only helped with finding that special Poet that help you.... I kept trying to reach you. But you know this is so special and this is why I said she just has to get a sponsor cause I have read most nearly all your work since the first time I seen you.
Post a piece. It is so romantic and sweet just like this wonderful poem. I'll email who for ya. ;) Smiles Love you sweetie!
So glad to be able to see those sunshione eyes again
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Greetings.
Goreja.com
I only helped with finding that special Poet that help you.... I kept trying to reach you. But you know this is so special and this is why I said she just has to get a sponsor cause I have read most nearly all your work since the first time I seen you.
Post a piece. It is so romantic and sweet just like this wonderful poem. I'll email who for ya. ;) Smiles Love you sweetie!
So glad to be able to see those sunshione eyes again
I like the entire piece ... I love the ending!
~Joseph
May Lu, a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)