rounded seat and back
covered in red naugahyde
fastened by tarnished gold tacks
sitting outward from the dining table
at a less than perpendicular angle
upon black and white checkerboard tiles
a series of scars mark the floor
in proximity to the chair's steel legs
some scars are deeper than others
perhaps in proportion to the patron's weight
or maybe the manner of their exit
from the dinner table
but their exits are nothing compared
to the crumbs they leave behind
Ahhh, MP... it's automatic, now. When I get to your poem, I go into "curl up" mode and my head thanks me. As if in your old chair, I feel wrapped and warm. Never worry about not posting often, for each of yours lingers and is savored. katy xox.
MP....
after an few months absence from the site, I'm once again reading your poems...and I realise just how much pleasure I've been missing..
You have the most wonderful ability, through your words, of turning the ordinary and mundane into something intense and dramatic...
I'm looking forward to catching up with your posts...
there is no such thing as an ordinary chair or any inanimate object--it becomes a living entity when you write about it--you wind up caring for the damn thing :)
now that takes talent--and you have it, in spades
WELL DONE! most beautifully and cleverly written--i actually saw the chair come to life :)
the old chair sits and waits
for the next passer by
one who doesn't hate
or is afraid to once again try
one who might sit and remenisce
of times of love and life
one who sits and may wish
of becoming again one mans wife
like the chair she's torn
tattered here and there
sat upon and scorn
for things in life she'd share
I lost track of my thoughts
I just remembered something I was told once in therapy... "so what, if they called you a chair would that make you a chair"
Indeed-
I loved your poem, it made me think of so many many things. I look forward to reading you more
I dont think I put this much effort into thinking on anything since my last acid trip...many, many years ago...you do describe the chair well, as if it had its own feelings and memories, an excellent idea for a write, MP...Peace found within the folds of that chair, Ed & Rufuz
Very interesting thoughts, a deep analytical and curious mind, it's wonderful to see how you describe in such fine detail, the things some take for granted. Thank you for sharing this super write with us.
This is most excellent. The nostalgia of your poetry is genuis. I always read your prose and am quited . It's what I need when times get me down.
Thank you. Your work is appreciated!
Susan
sitting
in a chair
shaped like me...
Walk in peace, Carole
Good one.
You are a genius.
after an few months absence from the site, I'm once again reading your poems...and I realise just how much pleasure I've been missing..
You have the most wonderful ability, through your words, of turning the ordinary and mundane into something intense and dramatic...
I'm looking forward to catching up with your posts...
take care..
Graham
there is no such thing as an ordinary chair or any inanimate object--it becomes a living entity when you write about it--you wind up caring for the damn thing :)
now that takes talent--and you have it, in spades
WELL DONE! most beautifully and cleverly written--i actually saw the chair come to life :)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
for the next passer by
one who doesn't hate
or is afraid to once again try
one who might sit and remenisce
of times of love and life
one who sits and may wish
of becoming again one mans wife
like the chair she's torn
tattered here and there
sat upon and scorn
for things in life she'd share
I lost track of my thoughts
I just remembered something I was told once in therapy... "so what, if they called you a chair would that make you a chair"
Indeed-
I loved your poem, it made me think of so many many things. I look forward to reading you more
Very interesting thoughts, a deep analytical and curious mind, it's wonderful to see how you describe in such fine detail, the things some take for granted. Thank you for sharing this super write with us.
warm hugs
Elga
Thank you. Your work is appreciated!
Susan
(((HUGS))) and love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
a lesson! I would give a lot to have your
gift of imagery!;-) A true pleasure to read
for which I thank you!