Awesome write Sara... to make it into poem form type <br> before every line and inbetween stanzas :)
Reviewed by Courtnie
Reviewed on January 25, 2003
hey sara, i think this is one of you're BEST yet i really really like it a lot! and thats saying a lot seeing as i usually have something to say to correct but i dont its really good i love the theme and everything too! good job!
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
“The woman or man who is a poet, or fiction writer, or playwright, or all of these, is engaged constantly in a jazz ballet of vocabularies, passions, genders, histories, perspectives, death, love, and life. The music of revelation announces itself to
Adam
(right click on your mouse and it has a what to do pop-up)
Warm Love,
*-Brittany-*