Night, Lit (poem) by Micha Julian on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Woman Words (Reader)

Reviewed on September 30, 2003

Oh goodness gracious Micha....there you go again, writing from the inside out. The way its supposed to be done. This one is a poem to swallow whole. Thank you, thank you! Love ya
S

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on September 29, 2003

This was so moving, so very poignant, I loved this poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)

Reviewed on September 28, 2003

I seemed to have felt several emotions while reading this exceptional piece. Love, frustration, yearning, hope. Unique!

~Jackie~

Reviewed by Four Provinces (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2003

So much tenderness and vulnerability in this.
WOnderful work (((mi)))
Love,
C

Reviewed by Micha Julian

Reviewed on March 10, 2003

so many, many thanks...to all of you... god, this place makes one freer, at times, yes? the support and so much more, from poets/authors such as yorselves...
pretty humbling, yes, it is, at times, still, just, thanks, many!~

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

you write with interesting style my dear poet... im sure you are one person i would like to talk with... :)

Reviewed by richard poor

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

i think you are going deep...!!!

Reviewed by jing javier

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

perfect!

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

Stunning work...very compelling piece!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

luv how you have expressed this divine union... "I will feed with
my whole." excellent double-entendre...

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

Micha this is wonderful work, sounds and feel breathless with desire.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 9, 2003

Hello Micha,

You shine in this offering and mature with life.
Love and light,
Susan

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

Whole, yes. Wonderful write, Mi!! :)

Reviewed by Erica Ivory

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

Loved this.. perfectly scripted poem.

Reviewed by Netta Jack (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

As a lover of Cinquain poetry, I must say I loved this one. I loved the linking of the next verse with the ending of the preceding one. Great write.

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

{{{MICHA}}}}|{{SOUL SIS}}}}
I love this one."whole. you
and myself, one.
or is it two, two lay
within, writhe away our pain and
find light...

light? light
exists, yet...dims
while we make the moves as
two. so, let us light the stars as
one. whole.
Excellent Love ya
{{SOUL SIS PEG}}}}

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2003

Well done.
Flows very well, and I like the repetition of the words. Very rhythmic.

~E