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Deceived
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cruelty bared by a person
DECEIVED……… Oh God! Oh God Can you not see? What has happened to me? My life has been changed My soul has been led strayed Oh God! Oh God! Can you not see? I ask am I still me My joys have been scattered My happiness has been shattered Oh God! Oh God! Can you not see? What have you done with me? Alas! My pleasures have gone And in this greedy world I am lost I have been betrayed And kept in cave Oh God! Oh God! Can you not see? I am a hopeless angel Who wants to be free Who wants glee Oh God! Oh God! Shamin Bashir Shah

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Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi

Reviewed on April 20, 2009

You're very good at sad poems.
There's a traditional style called falak. Your poem goes in this direction, especially with the exclamation "Oh God! Oh God" constituting the refrain. The emotionality of your language is very powerful.

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