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Outside Looking In
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I'm on the outside looking in
I have been here my entire life!
How do I get inside from here?
Help, please someone tell me the way
I have been here my entire life
Nose pressed tightly against the window
in little boy fashion and form
How do I get inside from here?
Can I get in from here?
I have been here outside my entire life
from my adoption on
I have been lost since then
noone came back for me
I thought I had found the key
but lost it quickly
I have always been careless and clumsy that way
It is lonely out here
Yet looking on the bright side
It is familiar terrain
Hence proving this saying to be true
Every cloud indeed does have
a silver lining!
But yes, I'll confess
I always wanted to be inside........

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 Reviews of "Outside Looking In"
Reviewed by Micha Julian
Reviewed on August 26, 2003
yes, oh, you wonderful and kind poet/writer...a heart so big, it will alaways long, I suppose...but know, you make another, frightened and 'wanting to be on the inside'....feel so not alone...
and how much truth there is "inside" this piece, aching and hopeful... you , well, many thanks, Rodney Evan...
You are 'inside' the hearts and minds of those who feel your work!

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on August 1, 2003
It is others that fail you, not you.

Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on July 31, 2003
Candidly expressed. Makes me relate. There's something about accepting what we can't change...and there just might be something to finding what you wanted lost its appeal once you got it.

Anyway, Rodney...hugs to you.

Gina

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 31, 2003
I can feel the loneliness and frustration.

~Joseph

Reviewed on July 31, 2003
I feel this one, Rodney. Although I was not adopted, I know this feeling too well...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Leysa Lowery
Reviewed on July 31, 2003
I think quite a few of us feel lost on the outside from time to time. I like your insight into that feeling here.


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