One in Waiting (poem) by Rodney Evan Bohen on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Melissa Rives

Reviewed on August 28, 2003

Powerfully moving with vivid imagery...breath-taking. :)

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

Beauty in soft spoken words of love.
~Kerry

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

a great poem. very well done Rodney.

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

"She knew him before time was
He was her heart, she was his very breath"

That says it all.

Josie

Reviewed by Zenith Elliott

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

This is a beautiful romantic poem Rodney! ~Z~

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

Unique and creative weaved with beauty coming from every angle .....Wonderful poem!

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on August 22, 2003

Wow ... what a beginning!

Absolutely love this part:
"She knew him since before time
He was her heart, she was his very breath
They were one in the beginning of times fire

They were one in waiting................"

~Joseph

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 21, 2003

Most excellent, beautiful and mysteriously romantic Rodney!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on August 21, 2003

So beautiful, A wonderful collection of beautiful poetry, I love your stories here, and the deep wonderful love you protray in them,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 21, 2003

standing in power / the sun earthbound - great imagery... and I love the title, too. Dawn

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on August 21, 2003

A great write Rodney
Excellent
enjoyed much

William

Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)

Reviewed on August 21, 2003

Why Rodney empowering women these days hmmmmm I see such a romantic tendril here of drama, enlightenment, empowerment and a bit of drama too and I am enchanted and also mystified...AWESOME PIECE!
((((Hugs))))
~Nikki~

Reviewed by Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw)

Reviewed on August 21, 2003

excellent, Rodney! She knew him since before time
He was her heart, she was his very breath
They were one in the beginning of times fire

They were one in waiting................
What beautiful words.... thank you for sharing...
In Spirit,
Bear

Reviewed by Regina Pounds

Reviewed on August 21, 2003

Ah, I agree...so romantic and dramatic - a poem worthy of its subject.

Gina

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on August 21, 2003

Alright! How romantic and mysterious. Good job!