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Odors On The Feet
by Rosalyn R Smith → (All Poetry by Rosalyn R Smith)
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MY FATHER KEPT A TIGHT GRIP ON ME...


SLICKER THAN I HE WAS....


HE KNEW THE GAME,


TRACKING ME DOWN BY THE ODORS ON MY FEET...


DOWN THE SIDEWALK AND UP THE STEPS.


KNOCK, KNOCK!


WHO'S THERE?


OH SHOOT,


IT'S YOUR POPS!


WOW,


I'M STANDING AT THE DOOR PORTRAYING


THE POSSIBILITIES OF IGNORANCE...


WHILE GATHERING MY BELONGINGS,


NO ONE UTTERED A WORD,


AND JUDGING MY FATHER'S VIGILANTE LOOK,


ME, MYSELF AND I, DARE NOT...


 I JUST DRAGGED MY


HEART


AND RELEASED THE ODORS ON MY FEET...


MY FEET SEEMED DISTANT


WHILE I CREPT SLOWLY TO


THE CAR


AND INSIGHT THE CAR WAS, BUT SO VERY FAR...


HOW COULD I EVER HOLD MY HEAD UP HIGH AND


SURELY,


THIS BOY WOULD NEVER HAVE THE NERVE


TO EVER SPIT A WORD OUT AT ME AGAIN...


OH WELL, I'LL NEVER HAVE THE NERVE, EITHER!


FEELING AS IF MY LIFE WAS IN A DITCH,


I FELT THE DRUM RUMBLE AND KNEW THIS HERE LIFE


 WAS OVER...


LIKE A LOUD SPEAKER OF WORDS WITH THE WORDS


 BURSTING IN FLAMES,


MY IMAGINATION TOOK CONTROL OVER ME,


 TELLING ME,


I KNOW HE'S GOING TO KILL ME,


BUT WHEN!


WHAT'S WRONG WITH THIS PICTURE...


IT’S BEEN THREE DAYS,


AND HE'S KILLING ME WITH SILENCE,


MAKING ME WONDER,


WHEN WHERE AND HOW...


REPEATING IN MY MIND,


I JUST KNOW I'LL NEVER SPEAK AGAIN...


BUT, I DID


AND I SPOKE SILENTLY TO MY FATHER


AND HE KNEW THE ODORS ON THESE FEET


WOULD NEVER,


 EVER,


EVER EVER,


  TRY AND OUT SLICK, MR. SLICK...


SHOOT,


HE USED TO BE MY AGE TOO!


2002 All Rights Reserved, Rosalyn R Walker


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 Reviews of "Odors On The Feet"
Reviewed on August 30, 2004
(((rosalyn)))

o, the memories this one conjures! thank you--

fantastic writing! great job!

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 30, 2004
Rosalyn, there's never been a Father that hasn't been the subject of this write. If they have a teen daughter or son, they've been there.
This is good....really good! I had to grin a few times though...remembering when~

Lisa


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