You have used the device of repetition here to good effect. I too have used some repetition when I think it might work or the theme warrants it. In your poem, the repetition, rather than being in any tedious, actually highlights more effectively the other points you are making. Interesting poem. I'm glad I tracked it down. John
Timeless wisdom and advice on the art of living for today’s young and old: The art of thinking, the art of loving, the art of working, the art of leadership, the art of growing old.
A new translation by Sergio E. Serrano of this inspirationa
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Ron