Shadows from beneath my skin
tormented by verbal vapors
toxics dying to stay within.
Can't do the devil any favors.
Silver hearts turned to bronze
pink lungs, from tar, evaporate.
Mind weakened by lies and cons
the soul slowly to disintegrate.
Painful thoughts are memorized
sandy eyes plead for death.
Rhytmically pain is synchronized
under each desperate breath.
Feeling lost to recalled passion
slowly unfolding and understanding
the forbidden love turn to aggression.
The black hole to catch my landing.
Smell of poison, once sweet daisies,
sun dies in the blindness of love.
Giving this purity to only a, "Maybe."
Will this pain stop at "Enough!"?
(C) 2006 Brittany Renee
Hugs Angela
Excellent write to say the least..
I like your style Brittany..
Vesna:)
Very passionate writing Brittany.
Warm Regards,
Joseph
Brilliant metaphors too....
Regis
You have been missed; welcome back, girl! So good to see you; you haven't lost your touch! BRAVA; very well penned! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D
the emotional message is outstanding
(its part of life, unfortunately)
Good things to come I am sure in the future :)
keep writing.....you are an old soul
pax A
aka lady A
God Bless
Michelle~
Fee
A deep and brooding love poem..
We have enough...when we call enough !
Welcome back to the Board..
Peter