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Blindness of Love
by Brittany Renée → (All Poetry by Brittany Renée)
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I'm back :-)

Shadows from beneath my skin
tormented by verbal vapors
toxics dying to stay within.
Can't do the devil any favors.


Silver hearts turned to bronze
pink lungs, from tar, evaporate.
Mind weakened by lies and cons
the soul slowly to disintegrate.


Painful thoughts are memorized
sandy eyes plead for death.
Rhytmically pain is synchronized
under each desperate breath.


Feeling lost to recalled passion
slowly unfolding and understanding
the forbidden love turn to aggression.
The black hole to catch my landing.


Smell of poison, once sweet daisies,
sun dies in the blindness of love.
Giving this purity to only a, "Maybe."
Will this pain stop at "Enough!"?


 


(C) 2006 Brittany Renee


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 Reviews of "Blindness of Love"
Reviewed by J. Murphy
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
Like the flow of the first and fourth verses. J.

Reviewed by Angel God is Love
Reviewed on October 22, 2006
Wonderful work.
Hugs Angela

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on October 21, 2006
Oh ..this IS perfection..
Excellent write to say the least..
I like your style Brittany..


Vesna:)

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on September 28, 2006
A deep heart felt poem of lost love.. Don't ever give up! Some are lucky enough to find a better, deeper, abiding love.... M

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2006
When Love is blind to faults, I believe it is a good thing. When Love is blind to all the Blessings of Love, then it suffocates the soul and this is not good. Love comes from within so we must first learn to love ourselves before we can truly love others. The light of the Creator lives within us all and is a light that's meant to be shared!

Very passionate writing Brittany.

Warm Regards,
Joseph

Reviewed on September 22, 2006
The pen often releases the pains of the heart. Strong pen

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
Such depth of pain oozes from this penn.
Brilliant metaphors too....

Reviewed by Brett Moore
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
"The black hole to catch my landing". I can't think of a better line to describe that kind of pain.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
It's great to read you again, Brittany Renée. I can relate very empathically with the sentiments expressed in this poem. Thank you for sharing it. Love, peace, and strength to you,

Regis

Reviewed on September 21, 2006
Brittany,

You have been missed; welcome back, girl! So good to see you; you haven't lost your touch! BRAVA; very well penned! :)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 21, 2006
Wise and mature write, I love your timing of verses......
the emotional message is outstanding
(its part of life, unfortunately)
Good things to come I am sure in the future :)
keep writing.....you are an old soul
pax A
aka lady A

Reviewed on September 20, 2006
Glad to see you back Brittany, and this was another masterpiece from your pen, I enjoyed
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
Welcome back and with works like this you will be quite popular I have no doubt. This breathes with a poignancy that is both sad but wishful at the same time, well done Brittany.
Fee

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
Brittany

A deep and brooding love poem..
We have enough...when we call enough !
Welcome back to the Board..

Peter

Reviewed by Jeff Mason
Reviewed on September 20, 2006
Wonderfully written. Check that spelling of 'rhytmitically' ;-) Good to see you back. This was very deeply experienced. -- Jeff


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