Such a sad story. What a tender and vulnerable heart you exhibited here.
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on September 25, 2006
Tears of White ... stars raining down from Heaven,
Tears of White ... snowflakes falling from the sky,
Tears of White ... milk flowing from mother's breast.
This poem is naked emotion, splashed upon the page.
The end of a long love is difficult, spec if it was expected to last.
It's a difficult pain to explain and talk about.
Tearsof white salt sting.
Love lasts but a momment, but one never forgets.
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sad but i must say an excellent write
Love & Peace
William
Welcome back girl!!
Love Tinka
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Tears of White ... snowflakes falling from the sky,
Tears of White ... milk flowing from mother's breast.
This poem is naked emotion, splashed upon the page.
Welcome back Brittany ... good to read you again!
Love & Light,
Joseph
It's a difficult pain to explain and talk about.
Tearsof white salt sting.
Love lasts but a momment, but one never forgets.
Regis
in life
Peter
A very emottional write!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(