In the sheltered life I lead, love to me is a pleasant, lasting thing, with allowances made for forgiveness...but only if you have found the mate God intended you to have. So, Brittany, this poem pulls at the heartstrings and leaves me hoping that the next time round, God would be included before a choice is made.
God Bless
Lena
PS Thanks for dropping by my site. Much appreciated...and it's always special to make new friends. :)
Brittany,
Welcome back. I see that your time away has only served to better your writing. I don't know how you do it. This poem is very deep and has a wonderful feel to it.
I'll send an e-mail, later tonight!
Take care,
Jill
Hey, glad to see you back--just happened to do my once a quarter check of the den and saw you have posted a new poem.--Well done but I wonder what substituting the "can't" for cannot would do.
Sincerely, J.
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2006
An excellent poem, rhymes very subtle that do not detract from the meaning of the poem. Victor
Brittany...this is totally awesome, I am at a loss for words to describe this adequettly. Beautiful, haunting, intense, breathtaking all of the old adjectives fall short of describing this write. More please.
This is my personal inspirational book of poetry. It contains many poems written for family, friends, and relevant life situations. Hopefully you will find some that will encourage and inpsire you in whatever arena you are found in your circle of l
Inspirational poetry, written from the heart and soul. Verses that are well-suited for reading on a rainy day and that are guaranteed to bring a smile to your face.
God Bless
Michelle~
God Bless
Lena
PS Thanks for dropping by my site. Much appreciated...and it's always special to make new friends. :)
Welcome back. I see that your time away has only served to better your writing. I don't know how you do it. This poem is very deep and has a wonderful feel to it.
I'll send an e-mail, later tonight!
Take care,
Jill
Sincerely, J.
Regis
Felix L. Perry
'Voids are hard to fill
when the shadow points the blame'
its a top drawer!
Bom Bhole!
Roshan