Passionate heart beats breaths of romance
awaiting chance spontaneity.
Hear pieces fall at each empty glance
the lover reaches sobriety.
Tears fountain in a prolonged moment
begging heartbeats, compassion, comprise.
Romance suffers, lying here dormant
feigning happiness thru brazen lies.
Changing your heartbeat to be in tune
with desire and passionate lure,
want me, need me like night needs the moon!
Beat of your heart I need to be sure.
Passionately captivating verses, Brittany Renee. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
Well Norfolk Belle, you certainly know how to capture the essence of your passion within some powerful phraseology. Wonderful metaphorical moments threaded throughout this, 'Romance suffers, lying here dormant, feigning happiness thru brazen lies..' Super stuff Brittany...Panda :)
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on December 29, 2006
A beautiful romantic poem........
Blessed and Prosperous New Year 2007 With all that heaven has to offer for you.
Joselyn
Hey Brittany, where have ya been??? Very nice to see you posting again. This is a beautiful poem of longing, and hope that the future holds the promise for which the heart yearns. Nice work!
Take care,
Sherry
Robin Ouzman Hislop's poetry is certainly in dialogue with some of the key architects of the 'poetics of indeterminacy' – both the Modernist strands represented by the likes of Beckett and Stein, and the postmodernist strands represented, initially,
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Regis
Blessed and Prosperous New Year 2007 With all that heaven has to offer for you.
Joselyn
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God Bless
Michelle~
Take care,
Sherry