Unanswered (poem) by Brittany Renée on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 1, 2007

And... sometimes it's the cyring inside...
that part that nobody can see;
that truly devastates the soul.

we hide so often from others; but the worst hiding of all...
is when we hide from ourselves - I know, for I have mastered the art.

-- Jeff

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 29, 2007

emotively succinct ...

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on June 29, 2007

Brittany,

Your chose of words are perfect. May peace be always with you.

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on June 28, 2007

Poetry at its finest once again. Enjoyed the depth though the word count was shallow.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 27, 2007

My goodness, in just a few short lines you have express so much emotion, very well done.....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 27, 2007

You have expressed a great deal with an economy of words, Brittany Renée. Well done. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on June 27, 2007

Excellent writing,enjoyed very much...Hugssssss

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 27, 2007

Short and to the point, you captured your essence and showed your ability to live within yourself without the need for societies approval.

Fee

Reviewed by J. Murphy

Reviewed on June 27, 2007

The way the first three lines roll and the fourth lines stop definitely underlines the meaning. Great use of form. J.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 27, 2007

OOOO, this is quite remarkable, kinda shifting paradigms, and paradoxical insomuch that there is serenity within the angst of regret... Splendid...

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on June 26, 2007

This poem is so powerful and deeply beautiful, I too find that line very moving. I loved this poem.

Reindeer

Reviewed by E. Richardson

Reviewed on June 26, 2007

I found this write of your intriguing in many ways...tis been a while since I saw your work.
Don't keep us waiting so long.
This piece, while short, is quite powerful.
What intrigues me is the line..."inside myself serenity"...I say so because it stands out from the other lines with a light that is blinding. If in fact, you have found serenity within then you are going to be just fine.
Excellent write, my friend.