Great composition...great flow and rhythm...great command of the language...as I read this for a second time, it occurred to me that this piece has a flavor much like Dickinson.
This is an outstanding piece of work my friend.
If you tend to believe romantic, passionate, masculine poetry is a thing of past eras, read "She Intrigues Me," and be swept away in the beautiful craft of a contemporary poet of love.
This is an outstanding piece of work my friend.
Fee
God Bless
Michelle~