Unusual but I like the way it makes one wonder about this Princess and who she really is. Is she evil by design or designed by evil. Anyway I enjoyed...well done.
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Fee
Leaving the last line at six syllables really stresses your point. Well put together points. Find the last line of stanza two a tad bit cumbersome. However, your way of speaking to the corruption of the internet on people grabs the attention of the reader. "sign in sin" and "porn and scorn" are great turns. J.
Questions, unquestioned discoveries, and answers in parable and rhyme…. This collection records a journey starting with a 1960s retrospective and the first man on the moon, moving to a new millennium welcomed in with a terrorist spin, family crises,
God Bless
Michelle~
Regis
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Fee
Nice play on words to convey the disparity in life.