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The Torch and the Light
by Lonnie Hicks → (All Poetry by Lonnie Hicks)
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Too much the Torch, Too Little the Light

You were the Light

I carried
its warmth
illuminating the path we trod;

your flame warming my face

I your Dancing Nymph
you my Golden Prince

sequestering
Time in a Bottle
Fear and Negativity Throttled

But nymphs can dance
only so long
in the dark green forest
and princes
at some point
have realms to rule

and lights
  sometimes dim from lack of fuel
can become charcoal

we then
felt the Torch more than the Light
moths dying in the flame
habit began to rule,
faces soured

But you
and  I
secretly carried in leaden jar
embers from our light
never gave up
light dueling the night
light struggling with torch and flame
and we used it to heal you
on that hospital bed
when detached from
grimy groping
career seeking
meaninglessness
it became clear
in the end there is
only you and I
and those who care.
 

So gentle embers
swelled again
to flame
lit
as only they can only be
by the Human
Heart.

Your heart valves
unstuck
unclogged up
surged
that day with blood
the doctors said
they don't know how
or what healed you
but I do.




 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "The Torch and the Light"
Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on May 14, 2014
Fascinating for the words & phrases; the format style; also for the story of a miracle; especially interesting for me, with my mechanical valve.
but shouldn't you be the prince rather than the nymph?

Connie

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 14, 2014
You are a poet's poet… in love with love, and it shows with beautiful work like this. The metaphors are outstanding and the story is miraculous.

Ron

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on May 14, 2014
Beautifully penned. As always I love your phrasing

Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
Reviewed on May 13, 2014
Beautifully written.

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on May 13, 2014
heart felt words in this well penned poem. beautiful.

Reviewed on May 13, 2014
Miracles of the heart is survived by the light of love. Love is the greatest thing a human can feel its healing effect.

Sandie


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