On Passing A Village School (poem) by Peter E Adotey Addo on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on September 17, 2007

What a special message you can send in these little gems from your experience! Only you who have been out there doing His work can write this: and now your "work" brings a double dividend! So many fine poems (been at your site 30') I'll have to return soon... til then
a friend, michael guy

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero

Reviewed on September 22, 2004

To create something that a reader can identify with and attach sentiment to, by the simple description of a setting, takes talent. I really liked this poem.

Carmen

Reviewed by mz kimi

Reviewed on December 7, 2003

i was there. i could feel what you wrote.

Reviewed by Birdie Houston (Reader)

Reviewed on April 12, 2003

I could imagine the dusty road and the village school what a beautiful write and beautiful picture

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on April 7, 2003

and evocative write, poet. this vision is poignant in its clarity and simplicity.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on February 15, 2003

wow
we are more connected than we realize!! very good

Reviewed by Debbie Edmiaston

Reviewed on February 15, 2003

Excellent job!
Nothing but a shadow...
Brave children of the soil...
What an beautiful picture you paint with words!
Debbie :)

Reviewed by Rosalyn Smith

Reviewed on February 14, 2003

I like reading this one, nice....

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 5, 2003

Knowledge and wisdom is not in a dwelling called school, it is in the hearts and minds of men.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on February 4, 2003

Enjoyed this very much, Peter, wondeful images.

Reviewed by g g (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2003

Wonderful imagery(:
Excellent write
Lady G.

Reviewed by Eroica Mendoza (Reader)

Reviewed on February 3, 2003

if i were a good painter, i could have painted this really beautiful! :)

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on February 2, 2003

Love the shadow/shelter line. Great images.

Reviewed by Patricia Boudreau (Reader)

Reviewed on February 2, 2003

Bravo... may these children be a shining light to the future...

Reviewed by Christine Morell

Reviewed on February 2, 2003

Excellent! Great imagery...I love this.
Chrissie

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 2, 2003

Great Imagery!

Reviewed by Trey Bienville (Reader)

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

A perfectly captured mood & moment! Great Imagery!

Reviewed by Angels Near

Reviewed on February 1, 2003

This is truly inspiring to say the least. Most cannot appreciate what they see when they look outside their own realm of reality.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 30, 2003

it is perhaps a better classroom than most...excellent!

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on January 30, 2003

"As the earth rotates each day.
Farmers can tell the time "

WONDERFUL!!!!