all in a day's (poem) by Fr. Kurt Messick on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Peter Benson

Reviewed on June 14, 2004

ANd birds don't sing?

Reviewed by Victoria Murray

Reviewed on June 2, 2004

I enjoyed reading this one! Thanks for posting it!

Happy Writing!

Victoria

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on June 2, 2004

Very creative. I hope the break was enjoyed.

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on April 20, 2004

lol

Reviewed by Micha Julian

Reviewed on March 25, 2004

loved it, love the cacaphony, yet the connections, as well, Fr./Just, yes! also the style adds and makes the meaning all the more evident and then that final line!

Thank You!
m.

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)

Reviewed on March 23, 2004

hmmmm...well..get out...enough is enough!!! a line of work perhaps?..Let the dead bury the dead!..it has nothing to do with you..yes YOU know what I mean!!!!!!!!!!!

I hear you..but do YOU?????

vesna :)

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 22, 2004

Ha ha..Yes, I can relate also! This was great!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on March 15, 2004

I love the way you impact the reader with your "run on" sentences that expresses an urgency and sincerity of feelings. It's as if you're about to scream...and you do with that, "help Help HELP" plea! Well done, Father!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 13, 2004

Leaves me out of breath with the intensity of the feelings expressed, Father Kurt. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Nancy D.

Reviewed on March 11, 2004

I can relate at times, well written.

Nancy

Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)

Reviewed on March 10, 2004

yes!!!!!

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2004

loved Fr, nice and crisp, al, cherished sweet ideas

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2004

HAHAHAHAHA although this is serious Fr...
It made me laugh....I relate to it...
I am so burned out at the moment..
I need more than a coffee break...
a few extra arms and legs would do..
not enough of me to go around..
I love the form..how you connected
the lines...great flow...beautiful work..
floria

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 9, 2004

How well you describe what most of us feel in our work place!Excellent write! I agree with Mark, all part of God's lessons;-)

Reviewed by Mark Rockeymoore

Reviewed on March 9, 2004

lol i'm feelin this, having had jobs like this, which, fortunately, i lost not soon after. i think that god has a way of moving us where he wants us to be and putting us in situations that make us confront those issues of impatience and short-sightedness...lol

i think i need a coffee break now. ;) wonderful write!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2004

Sometimes that coffee break can save a life. Great write.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 9, 2004

Coffee break came just in time Huh?

Thanks for this offering...and allll the kind reviews..lol!!

Love Tinka