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From A Distance ( REVISED)
by Marlene Dawn → (All Poetry by Marlene Dawn)
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If I could be a snowflake
I'd softly blow around.
The wind sweeping me to and fro
gently toward the ground.

Before I land & melt
I'd travel to where you are
hoping to catch a glimpse of you
standing with your door ajar. ;-)

The heat would rise above you.
I'd fall gently toward your heart
Nestling on your shoulder,.
falling beneath your shirt.

I'd love the warmth I'd feel
and the smile upon your face
as you became one with me
in a melting heart embrace.

 

Copyright (c) 2004 Marlene Reid



 

 

 


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 Reviews of "From A Distance ( REVISED)"
Reviewed on March 3, 2004
A most beautiful and well-penned poem!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 28, 2004
you've done a superb job in making this a truly wonderful poem!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2004
I'd fall gently toward your [shirt]

Change shirt to "heart" so that you don't repeat the same word in the same verse.

This is darling. Loved it.

Elizabaeth

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 27, 2004
WONDERFUL poem!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 25, 2004
Marlene this is utterly enchanting! I love the premise of the snowflake and what you did with it. Very beautifully and romantically written!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on February 25, 2004
Nice job, Marlene! Warm and loving write. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on February 25, 2004
Marlene, this is romantically beautiful and the ending
is awesome. 'in a melting heart embrace' Wow! I love that.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on February 25, 2004
You revise well! Great poem! Lisa


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