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From A Distance ( REVISED)
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If I could be a snowflake I'd softly blow around. The wind sweeping me to and fro gently toward the ground. Before I land & melt I'd travel to where you are hoping to catch a glimpse of you standing with your door ajar. ;-) The heat would rise above you. I'd fall gently toward your heart Nestling on your shoulder,. falling beneath your shirt. I'd love the warmth I'd feel and the smile upon your face as you became one with me in a melting heart embrace. Copyright (c) 2004 Marlene Reid

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Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on March 3, 2004

A most beautiful and well-penned poem!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 28, 2004

you've done a superb job in making this a truly wonderful poem!

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)

Reviewed on February 27, 2004

I'd fall gently toward your [shirt]

Change shirt to "heart" so that you don't repeat the same word in the same verse.

This is darling. Loved it.

Elizabaeth

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on February 27, 2004

WONDERFUL poem!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Marlene this is utterly enchanting! I love the premise of the snowflake and what you did with it. Very beautifully and romantically written!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Nice job, Marlene! Warm and loving write. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

Marlene, this is romantically beautiful and the ending
is awesome. 'in a melting heart embrace' Wow! I love that.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on February 25, 2004

You revise well! Great poem! Lisa

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