C ause and effect have never been so false
A s lives are torn down and
R ipped apart and the core
O f your entire being no
L onger exists and try as
Y ou will with any might left it can
N ever go back and your
R everie becomes as false as the
E xistence you so strongly lived
D emarcating what once was
B elieved and trusted in, an
E fferevescent engram that will
A lways be worn as the
R ed letter from childhood tagged.
(C)Carolyn Red Bear (The Bear Paw) 2012 all rights reserved
image from Google images
You wring my heart with these lines Carolyn, yet, why do I feel hope so deep, your wisdom so deep, your depth of spirit, it is the whole of you, not just every single tearing line. Hugs my friend, many!!!!!
Superb poetry, Carolyn! So many thoughts swirl around in my mind, but my heart says to you, "Good energy sent for holistic healing to your soul, let nature cleanse and rejuvenate you so that you will be whole once again!" Spontaneous response, my sweet friend.
Hi Carolyn, you have the ability to remain engaged while seeing all things around you both the beautiful and the painful with clear eyed contemplation. A rare gift.
This is amazingly sad, Carolyn, although beautifully written. You make your case superbly. I felt every word in every line, because I have been where you are on a few occasions, and it is hell, pure hell. Here's hoping you'll be able to deal with the problem, which I know you will, and come out of it even better than you were before life kicked you so rudely.
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Share
Print
Save
Follow
Ron
the conditions and circumstances may be far from
perfect but you will triumph - this i know
Strength to you!
john
Regis
Pierre
fee
Peace, love and angel light,
Amber
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. ;D
a very interesting write, I am sure you will triumph.
Budd