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La Playa
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Saturday, July 2, 2022    Rated "G" by the Author.
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A family dinner on vacation in Mazatlan, Mexico.

On a warm, Sunday night
juat got off my phone
We board an old bus
for Mazatlan's Gold Zone

Take narrow boulevards to
La Playa Restaurante
White lights wound round palms
Christmas in January

After one half hour wait
spicy smells, Latin band
Watching tourists Samba
led to table near the sand

Moonlight, a single candle
the flash of red/yellow fire
Beef on a Sword entree
becomes brother's desire

Spanish guitars play
as we eagerly wait
then "No fireworks tonight.
Storm coming, it's too late"

Three discos up the coast
orange, yellow bright light
like grounded fireworks
complete the night

 


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Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on July 3, 2022
The wonders of Mexico and so many beautiful beach communities. It is a treasure that Mexico has, along with the mariachi bands and low-priced good drinks and eats. Have apartheid in that magic, too.

There is a rather large contingent of Americans heading south of the border to enjoy that lifestyle year-round in retirement.

Ron

Reviewed by audrine max
Reviewed on July 2, 2022
this sounded like so much fun. i enjoyed the course of imagery in your piece. my mouth watered picturing out the beef on a sword. i'm glad you had a wonderful time. thank you.


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