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needle prick
by Alan Abrams → (All Poetry by Alan Abrams)
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secret shadow, latent lump,
abnormal level...what ho!
needle, not so slender as you’d hope,
still it's but a prick, but no--
--no, it’s not the pain that makes his eyes avert--
as blood, his blood, spurts up the slope
of the pristine, glassine tube
with each detectable pulse
of the lubdub heart

what news is borne on each deceitful molecule,
telltale platelet, tattle telling corpuscle,
what feckless hemoglobin stewing--
in cellular conspiracy, protein revolution, underneath these skins, brewing--

pulse--quickens--blood--thickens--

--what organic mutiny, drumhead jury--
lifedeath sentence, summary execution--
is in store--for him today?

 

 


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 Reviews of "needle prick"
Reviewed on July 24, 2015
Having worked in the medical field, I can appreciate what the patient feels in your words. Having been the patient, I appreciate them even more. I like this!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on July 11, 2015
Frightening piece of writing. Painful and fascinating. Difficult to put words on such organic experiences, which is what makes it surprising. And cold. Beautiful word choices, clinically striking.

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on April 22, 2012
There are blood tests---and blood tests. Mine are routine, monthly checks to monitor coagulation. The type that you write about with fear of impending doom are so "other than routine." The little vial holds the prophecy of his future. Apprehension reigns.

Connie

Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
Reviewed on April 9, 2012
Oh my vision here. Fear. You have painted the pallet of fear. Great power punch in adjectives of 'deceitful' molecule and 'tattle' telling corpuscles. It highlights with bright yellow marker the 'too up close and personal' we've gotten with our megamicro analytics that can most often create more havoc than we began with. Sorry, I have a thing about white coats. I enjoy your word "glassine". ~~ Diana

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 23, 2012
I often go for blood tests; your words hold special meaning, Alan. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by Asa Seeley
Reviewed on March 9, 2012
hope the results is negative for anything other than normal. thanks for sharing.

asa

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 9, 2012
Powerful words about the fear we feel when we are forced to have a blood test and we suspect that something terrible was wrong.

Ron


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