Depends on where you did your time, if it worked for you, then your future will change for the better...if your life is your time, then I think you seem to be doing just fine...if this poem is any example...Ed
Girl, this is good. It's sooooo good. I get so tired of people saying, Oooh, don't talk to me if you got drama. Well, sugars if you don't have drama, you've flat-lined. You're dead. Life is drama. It's how you handle it that makes the difference. Simplicity is in the mind. Master it! Great write!
Excellent Z~ we all come to our time when we understand the things that have brought us to it.I think life is lived on levels of understanding, and how long it takes us to reach each level is up to how much we put in to learning about ourselves. Love, Eileen
Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
Yes this one has a lot of depth and insight and brings out some truths as well.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
Indepth and thoughtful write about our life here on this old planet. I believe that we do take ourselves a bit too seriously for the most part. It has taken me quite a few years to understand that and the fact that people can actually get along if they pnly put their minds to it and forgive themselves for the thoughts that they have which hinder that "getting-along." You really took this poem to another level. Good.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on February 21, 2005
Gotta let them ole shackles go go go, and move on on on, and have fun fun fun..
David Hightower’s lyrically expansive meditation on the whims of fate and the unpredictability of the human condition fill the pages of THE HANGING MAN DREAMS with thrilling music and mesmerizing imagery. Hightower’s richly infused voice echoes the e
This book represents a thirty-day period of my poetry journal. Each poem addresses
the dominant thoughts occupying my mind during the early morning hours of a given
day.
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This poem flows from a fountain of deep thoughts to
the lake of sublimity. "Done My Time" is an inspiring
poetic excellence.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
You are really, really Goooood!
(ever read Watt's, "the Wisdom of In-Security"?)
deep and inspired poem ...
Great determined write..
Thanks for sharing!!
Love Tinka
A strong, affirming write--well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
That pic is kewl!