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Love and its Figurative Allusions.
by Mor o' Inchrory → (All Poetry by Mor o' Inchrory)
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Forenote, this is unlikely to work on any French speaking ladies, the French take a very dim view of those who mangle their language.
However, words of love and their subsequent allusions are a many splendoured thing.

 Love and its Figurative Allusions.

 

“Life, is competition,” she said, somewhat alluringly,

“I guess it is, I replied, a little more than suspiciously.

Wondering, as to how, such a notion got in her head.

Did she perhaps mean it, as a subtlety, supposedly?

That,I ought, to give consideration’s attention

To more, seductive ways, of getting her into bed.

Therefore, me had better, give verbiage, its appease,

or write, perhaps words, destined, of her to, please.

For like those ever quoted “The darling buds of May”

I may somehow, achieve mine, earnest seeming way!

Whereby, to give her wishes, a romancing it detect

to soothe such reservations with “le Gaulois” of respect.

For there, it said, and often guaranteed, I’m sure.

You cannot beat,a little “Ooh là la”and all its French allure..  

        

   O chérie Je t'aime, oui c'est vrai                                            

    Je vous donne l'amour, ma chère!                                

     Tis like ruelle’s encircled rose

         That grows in all repentir.

            Its tender ways of hope repose.               

              And wakes désirs ardents ses joies

                Of many ways it, freed aspire

                   From, nouvelle façon plaisirs.

                      Like, enchante de forme libre

                        As chacune de mes pensées.

                           Your entirety entwined me

                               By diminutations tease.

      To feel alimente truths, its flamed fires

         How could you, deny me, my désires?

            Et laissez-moi pas- its seeking way

               Où son âme by such a means conspires            

                  To gently- de prendre votre cadeau

                     In unhindered sweet embrace!

                        And see ces joies of our ensued way

     De l'amour tons, on dulcet key an’ lyre.

       Desirous, in all its dreamed case

         That you may let me -de sorte arracher

          Bourgeon bloom of your consent and place.

             When by récente-overtures, I will,

                Faire de ce rêve semble vrai.

                  Cette douceur habiter, by still,

                     Comme, prudent searching thought-avère

                      Plaisir de l'entrée, of which loves propre,

                       In sharing ways trouver “Mon amour”

          Avec amour ma chérie, mon esprit te cherche

         My sweet; Ma joie sincère- qu'il est complet.      

        

 

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 Reviews of "Love and its Figurative Allusions."
Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on December 2, 2013
my translator agrees ...

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on November 30, 2013
I'm still hung up on "earnest seeming way."
You wouldn't be dropping a little hemming on me would you, Mor?
Brilliant as usual, the parts I understood.

Reviewed by Robert Whitford
Reviewed on November 30, 2013
Barely mastering english myself and not being accustomed to much use of other languages, I am not one of those who could easily digest these frankish phrases. The english is well done for a love poem and I guess it would charm the pants off the lady folk. The choice of script was probably for a romantic effect, but with my practical midwest orientation, just made it harder to read. A good effort and a form that we've never seen you use before. I liked it overall. Maybe we can lure some women here to get their input Mor? Bob

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on November 30, 2013
Quite a departure from your usual fare, but nonetheless alluring. While the English was very direct and flirtatious, your bursting into French with such panache was brilliant and will have the ladies swooning as they savor every word.

Unfortunately, being a heterosexual man, I have not as enamored as the distaff will be. ;-)

Ron


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