Such Sadness of my Morning Dream. (poem) by Mor o' Inchrory on AuthorsDen

Such Sadness of my Morning Dream.
by Mor o' Inchrory → (All Poetry by Mor o' Inchrory)
Friday, March 6, 2015 Rated "PG13" by the Author.

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A Sonnet.
*Such Sadness of my Morning Dream.* *Let me dream, let me dream, that dream again,* *you were meant in mind’s eye to see me.* *Without, this mask o’ memory’s weighted pain,* *Shaped by contumeliousness’ self-made cadre.* *In truth, a hundred times, I’ve seen you go* *in purposed steps ne’er set on pausing.* *Oh! How I wish my thoughts could only show* *when you pass me close by; each morning.* *Would you so coruscate one small glance, my dear?* *in your alacrity of day’s dawning.* *What thoughts are yours, purlieus that seem so clear?* *whilst mine are left with lonely yearning.* *Who cares they now, of my snafu’s lone plight?* *When, war returns its own, bleak brokenness of right.* *Mor.*

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on March 7, 2015

Strange� Has it been a year? I thought of you this morning and wondered why you hadn't written. Was it some of the illness you spoke of, or worse? Just popped into my head. And now, I see this poem from you filled with longing and remorse, something that Jerry is constantly bemoaning, and I wonder why he cannot understand when he expects others to understand him.

Twice this week, others and I had the same vibe about poetry. This morning, I found an ideal photo of the same name as my poem taken in 2012. And now this. I don't believe in supernatural things, but these connections I'm getting are quite unnerving.

Please stick around and let us smell your roses. You will make poets of us, yet.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

I would never criminate a writer concerning intent. Nor would I wag a finger at them for their intelligence, or complain about their effective use of languages vast palette of colors. Your choice here suites well the gist of your thoughts, Mor. Always a delight reading your poetic-inventions. Peace to you... rlc

Reviewed by Mor Inchrory

Hi Jerry,
I suppose if one is fortunate enough to dream, why waste it on mono- syllables.
Anyway you have just reminded me as to why I gave Authorsden a miss for a year, nothing much has changed it would appear.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on March 6, 2015

I don't mind going to the dictionary for a word, maybe two, but you over-indulged in words which seemed to put there merely for the reason that makes you seem brilliant and the rest of us ignorant. Sorry, this is how I feel. Naw, not sorry at all.