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The Little Song. Extended sonnet. A fifteen-minute exercise in repartee.
by Mor o' Inchrory → (All Poetry by Mor o' Inchrory)
Saturday, March 14, 2015    Rated "PG13" by the Author.
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This brief exercise meant as a repartee to a Poet on Authorsden, where I mistakenly offered to realign his poetry, which I considered was badly out of step, the offer was rejected as he maintained he hated metric verse and that the disjointed verse was intentional.

 I have no reason to disagree with him, other than I probably irrationally dislike rhyming poetry that wanders in and out of step like a mad donkey and in all fairness, he does write some nice free verse on occasion. So we just agree to differ, he goes his way and I go mine to where the twain shall never meet.

 

For those that can and those that won’t

and those who never will.

What poem read, or self avaunt,

our choice remains there still.

 

To stay in step or traipse along

in words that seem vagarious,

What memory then the little song,

that bears animi in bareness.

 

Free verse nonce words are soon forgot

we dance not to their bidding.

What structure built from mind’s marplot

sees Incubus in gyving.

 

So let me walk my lonely path,

my songs are mine they seek no wrath.

And if they should in briefness stay

Despair I not, if they  recede away.

 

 


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 Reviews of "The Little Song. Extended sonnet. A fifteen-minute exercise in repartee."
Reviewed by CHANTI LACE
Reviewed on March 21, 2015
interesting indeed ...enjoyed very much...

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 15, 2015
Your way with words and phraseology is uniquely yours, Mor. There will always be those who accept us and those who reject us. The reasons are irrelevant. Accomplishing what you were put on Earth to do takes precedence over everything else. In the spirit of metaphor: Not every method or fertilizer works in the garden. Finding the right ones (approach) is tantamount to the kind of endurance that allows ourselves and others to continue to produce blossoms. Despite the battles you've fought in the public forum your garden of words still remains verdant. Your legacy will be your literary and poetic creations, not your opinions. Your work is appreciated here in SoCal. Continued inspiration... rlc

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on March 14, 2015
Cool write.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 14, 2015
A poem with a purpose. I like that. I have also noticed that of all the free verse out there, I remember the rather banal jingles the most… And the clichés. I guess the reason they are clichés is because they strike a chord and people use them too much even though in their original location they stood out.

As for the dance. I learned all the classical dances early in life and they help me to dance in their perfect pattern. But, when I get on the dance floor and the beat picks up, I often change the dance step abruptly even though my dance partner has trouble keeping up. Life's little serendipity.

Ron


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