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The Leaving
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Dr Audrey Coatesworth writes this poem about the death of her mother


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The Leaving

 

She left with little warning

Together, then life was gone

Eyelids stilled all movement

No breathing. Death had won

 

Yet victory to her belonged

Without fear in her final hour

A brief encounter with a pain

But it had no power

 

I would ask that when I die

I could have a similar fate

Holding hands with one I loved

Never early but not late

 

She was there one minute

The next I started sorrow

No more to talk or walk with her

We shall not meet tomorrow

 

She died before her body

Became too burdensome to carry

Heaven knew that she was weary

And no longer made her tarry

 

I said goodbye. I kissed her

Stroked her forehead. Combed her hair

Her face serene, she had gone

She had nothing more to share

This poem is Copyright ACoatesworth 2009

This poem is in her book 'Daily LIfe' - for sale in the authorsden bookstore and from her website.

 

 


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 Reviews of "The Leaving"
Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 9, 2011
Sensitive fine writing, Audrey,
i can identify with well.

John

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on February 9, 2011
this was so wonderfully written. The emotion and sequence of loss...a word that I have known so well.

Blessings

Allen

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on February 9, 2011
This poem of loss is so meaningful, just so authentic and beautiful Audrey ~
Christine

Reviewed on February 9, 2011
This a beautiful tribute to your loved one Audrey.
It reminds me of when my own mother .
Love to you and yours, Mary


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