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Struck By Lightning

by Michael Charles Messineo — Read all 96 poems by Michael Charles Messineo

A picture paints a thousand words, but few can hold the brush and paint the right picture, unless they are struck by the creative lightning.

Friday, December 17, 2004


Poem Artwork

A tree of light,

 a tree of spark. 
Light, then sound, 

paints the dark. 

 

A beautiful work of 

nature’s touch. 
The power to grasp, 

a bit too much.  

 

The other side 

of this beauty's burst 
lightning's force 

stabs at the earth 

 

can stop a life 

or start fires anew, 
as rain surrounds 

the horizon's view.  

 

But writers can have

 a similar spark 
a lightning thought 

light's up their dark. 

 

The words appear 

with a muses touch 
the literary challenge, 

not too much.  

 

The other side 

of this writer’s lament 
the struggle for words

 to help cement 

 

the meaning behind 

the story to tell 
sometimes lost 

from a thought that fell.

 

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Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on May 27, 2010
Excellent poem, Michael

Reviewed by veera r (Reader)
Reviewed on December 21, 2006
I wanted to write a farewell poem for a retiring staff at the uni and was looking for some nice words. She was very active so she was code worded " Lightning" and offlate Lightning (mc) Queen. She would slip memo's from the principal and vanish like a lightning. She did her duty and refused a farewell party in her honour!..such straight forward and simple people are hard to find ! I saw your poem and was inspired to write a farewell note thus ( I used the first two paragraphs ( ofcourse acknowledged) and modified the remaining as follows.. here it goes)

Lightning

A tree of light, a tree of spark.
Light, then sound, paints the dark.
A beautiful work of natures touch.
the power to grasp, a bit too much.

The other side of this beauty's burst
lightning's force stabs at the earth
can stop a life or start fires anew
as rain surrounds the horizon's view.

But Special People create a similar spark
a lightning thought light's up our dark
the words appear with a muses touch
their motivation and challenge a bit too much.

Something just slipped under my door
I hasten to pick up the thunder on floor
I rush to check who’s at the door,
The lightning Just Struck - but beneath the door!!

Loss of words is as evident here
Pangs of yet another strike, not quite, I am clear
It struck me well in the past, time and again
Alas! I realized strike it will, never ever again!!

Sad should we be, I milled
“All Good things must end “- as it is willed
But happy I should be, I am thrilled
Coz she’s my model (to emulate)-at least that’s settled!!

“Do your best; the lord takes care of the rest!” she silently said
“This all I ask for and there is nothing that I shall want” –she finally said
While her will prevails , it’s the wish that entrails
So here we are to say -“You inspiration will always be there to stay”

I am not a poet and this is my first try..so your comments and corrections welcome..Veera



Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on December 28, 2004
I am fasinated with your point of view and images. Love the photo too! I can see you in this storm on your bike; smiling :-)

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on December 21, 2004
My highest compliment to you
WISH I WROTE IT!!!

bravo!

Reviewed on December 21, 2004
happy holidays Michael, great piece with a punch, knockout! G

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
Graphic image and verses complement one another to offer a superb creative experience. Thank you, Michael. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on December 18, 2004
Michael, Well you word paint quite well! Outstanding work here!
Enjoyed the smiles this brought!

Lisa

Reviewed on December 17, 2004
(((michael)))

*STANDING OVATION* o, this is GORGEOUS, so inspiring--so beautiful--so--so--PERFECT

storms inspire me, too, been indirectly hit twice...maybe that's why LOL

GORGEOUS! both pic and write--thank you--a keeper

(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)

Reviewed on December 17, 2004
wow! this one "struck" me in a rather profound way; what a great piece of writing, and that picture is stunning! great stuff! well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
The duality found in all things! Superb write Michael, very inspired!
methinks lightning struck you in the right place;-)!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
Quite profound, Michael; love the graphic.

Reviewed by D May (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
Wonderful poetic words. Enjoyed this very much.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
Yep, Nature gives us all reason to rhyme...Ed

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
Well penned, Michael and so true. Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 17, 2004
Nice write and very true.
Felix


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