I tried to write this poem
and changed it way too much,
then counted all the syllables
and learned the rhythm sucks.
I used my thesaurus
upgraded all the words,
poetic justice don’t apply
this smells like walrus turds.
I flipped around the lines
dissected every meaning,
then took out this and that,
with mental veto screening.
This is the last stanza.
Won’t let my readers down.
So I’ll end this little ditty
Fade out til there’s no soun...
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hmmm... You clever guy you!
Great poem! I loved the feelings it emitted!
Awesome picture too, MYSTERIOUS and BEAUTIFUL in ONE!
WRITE ON~!
Warmest Blessings of Love and Peace, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
Bend the rules, you can. It's the content, not the form - just like a lady. This review is a year late but the poem still rocks...the graphics too.
Cynthia
Edwin
Leann
Fee
Be always safe,
Karen
Love Tinka
Thank you for sharing. Love and Warmth, Carin' Spirit
How I can relate and honestly say, "Been there, done that..." far too many times. The walrus turds references leaves quite the visual. I'm glad you were able to finish this poem and share it, though. The adorable nature of this was well worth the struggles to find the words!!!
Have a great night,
Jill