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Perfection

by Michael Charles Messineo — Read all 96 poems by Michael Charles Messineo

Perfection, like beauty, is in the eye of the beholder. More often than not it is a level of personal acceptance to the one, and not to the many. Perfection is not your choice, it is an unexpected result.

Friday, August 10, 2018

 

Perfection’s hard to find, but several fail to see

collected pain and anguish that forms the perfect seed.

Course correction, new directions, many paths to count.

The finished product’s ready, the grade always in doubt.

 

Critics scream for more, do it one more time.

Make your magic happen, better and refined.

Perfection’s very tricky, the stars must all align.

Solitude and wisdom must form specific lines.

 

Inspiration, outside sources, every tic of day

must align like chemistry to blend in every way.

Things that fall in place, beyond your self control,

torture, fear, exhaustion, must take a flawless stroll.

 

Ingredients of life, some this, some that, and more

funneled through creation, to bake a cake of lore.

Repeating unplanned efforts, when once it flowed so right.

All forces must support the truth, to bring it to the light.

 

You cannot force perfection and simply turn it on.

Perfecting any art, like life, is a forgery for some.

No such thing as do-overs, more like try again.

Perfection is a hallowed ground, you cannot plan it’s end.





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Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on September 19, 2018
I AM A PERFECTIONIST IN ALMOST EVERYTHING. SO, I AGREE. TO REACH PERFECTION IN TERMS OF WRITING IS AN ON-GOING PURSUIT. WE ARE OUR WORSE CRITICS AND USUALLY HAVE TO STOP OURSELVES FROM MAKING ENDLESS CHANGES, TRYING TO...PERFECT. FOR ME THE BOTTOM LINE IS; JUST DO IT! ROLL IT AROUND AND DO WHATEVER YOU HAVE TO DO TO FEEL COMFORTABLE WITH HAVING REACHED FOR PERFECTED FINISH PRODUCT TO THE BEST OF YOUR ABILITY. NEVER FEEL HAMPERED OR LOCKED INTO WHAT ONE MIGHT CONSIDER A 'DONE DEAL'. BECAUSE...THE FIRST END RESULTS IS NEVER THE END. THERE'S ALWAYS ROOM FOR IMPROVEMENT AND...SNIP, SNIP...REARRANGEMENT. WHEN IT'S OVER YOU'LL KNOW. WHEN IT'S AT ITS 'ACCEPTABLE', STATE OF 'PERFECTION', YOU'LL KNOW. THANKS FOR SHARING, MICHAEL. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Lalita Vasu
Reviewed on August 13, 2018
Very well written! Never thought about Perfection in this way.

Reviewed on August 10, 2018
Thought compelling write indeed! (as always!)

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 10, 2018
I think your poem was spot on in regards to perfection. Like you wrote, it may be the result of luck or persistence. Regardless of how we come about it, perfection is always desired over the alternative.

Ron

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on August 10, 2018

as always, well worth the read!

nicely done


never stop writing
m


Reviewed on August 10, 2018
You can't possibly fit your writings to just one critic's opinion. What is perfection in one's eyes may not be perfect in another's. I always go with the opinions of my friends and fans. They are the ones whom I need to please. They are the ones who will like my style.

I always believe in myself. I always believe the latest work of mine is my best.

Sandie

Reviewed by Michael Schafer
Reviewed on August 10, 2018
Just about perfect.


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