In the haze of work I saw
The elixir of self was raw
Creativity of mind was fluctuating
And the strength of self was nothing
But when I look at the heavy pocket
I bring all the frustration in bracket
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Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 5, 2006
Frustration it is overwhelming this is full of wise words.
GLIMPSE OF AN ANGEL IS NOW AVAILABLE. A PORTION OF ALL SALES WILL GO TO HOSPICE TO THUS ENABLE THEM TO HELP OTHERS WHO ARE SOON TO PASS TO THE OTHER SIDE. NO LONGER AVAILABLE.
A play on words? nevertheless, either way a wise and sound composition with much to think about Masood. A good write.
warm hugs
Elga
Thank You
Peaceful Days everyday for you and your family,
Tracey
~Nikki~
The elixir of self was raw
Creativity of mind was fluctuating
And the strength of self was nothing
Frustration broken down to it's basic element.. Great write